The Rust of Time, New Epoch and Our Plane

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Altawell
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The Rust of Time, New Epoch and Our Plane

Post by Altawell » Wed Dec 08, 2010 8:18 am

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In the darkness
I mentioned your name
In the darkness
I decoded
The mystery of
Your present game
In the darkness
The whole hope
Of your universe
Died
Then suddenly
Born
Again
In the darkness
A beacon flashed
Carrying
The script of
Your own
Name
In the darkness
The flame of
Your life
Flourished
Despite the rust of
Time
In the physical
Plane
Again and again
Tell me
Tell me
Tell me
Again and again
What on earth
During the coming cycle
Is your ultimate aim?
Or it is nothing
But
Another epoch
Where your chaos
Will always rule
First
Our plane?








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Joehanna
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Re: The Rust of Time, New Epoch and Our Plane

Post by Joehanna » Fri Dec 10, 2010 10:53 am

I like this! I love the words that you have used in this poem :bow:

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Re: The Rust of Time, New Epoch and Our Plane

Post by Altawell » Sun Dec 12, 2010 6:37 am

Joehanna wrote:I like this! I love the words that you have used in this poem :bow:
Thank you for the message and for the nice words - good to hear from you :hello:
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