I am light as a petal
Flying down the hill with my bicycle
Frosty wind taking a way my last dream
I bet this is what freedom feels like
Golden leaves running away from me
Nature ringing my bicycle bell
The wind whispering lies to my ears
But I know better by now
-I cover my ears with my scarf
Now I am lie-free, light as a petal
The clearest air has taken a way my past
I’ve been in prison too long
I am reborn, there is no tomorrow
Now I am light as a petal
light as a petal
This is what freedom feels like
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Jadynara
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Re: This is what freedom feels like
this is such a neat piece. Great descriptive work here!-
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Re: This is what freedom feels like
The open road on two wheels.a downhill stretch free from the effort of pedalling is the nearest thing flying free imaginatively
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Re: This is what freedom feels like
Thank you
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