This is what freedom feels like

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Joehanna
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This is what freedom feels like

Post by Joehanna » Tue Sep 28, 2010 4:57 am

I am light as a petal
Flying down the hill with my bicycle
Frosty wind taking a way my last dream
I bet this is what freedom feels like

Golden leaves running away from me
Nature ringing my bicycle bell
The wind whispering lies to my ears
But I know better by now
-I cover my ears with my scarf
Now I am lie-free, light as a petal

The clearest air has taken a way my past
I’ve been in prison too long
I am reborn, there is no tomorrow

Now I am light as a petal
light as a petal

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Re: This is what freedom feels like

Post by Jadynara » Tue Sep 28, 2010 12:48 pm

:thewave: this is such a neat piece. Great descriptive work here!
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Re: This is what freedom feels like

Post by poeticpiers » Tue Sep 28, 2010 2:34 pm

The open road on two wheels.a downhill stretch free from the effort of pedalling is the nearest thing flying free imaginatively
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Re: This is what freedom feels like

Post by Joehanna » Tue Sep 28, 2010 11:50 pm

Thank you

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