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Laverne Pacquire
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Woe

Post by Laverne Pacquire » Mon Jul 12, 2010 9:01 am

In happened - in the death of lost;
Memory in me reached out.

To the once of love in tossed seas;
Connecting the shape and sharp lease;
Words of solemn self: I am and forever will be.

I rise - in sake of “what relief” remains;
Shaken in the vanish in dark refrains;
Shadows, joys, talked about - yet no more.



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Re: Woe

Post by JadedHopes » Sun Jul 18, 2010 7:50 am

this is beautiful!! love the imagery and metaphors.
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smallvolume123

Re: Woe

Post by smallvolume123 » Wed Jul 21, 2010 1:59 am

I love the name of this piece. Reminds me of the time I drank too much Ripple. :lol:
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Re: Woe

Post by gordy » Wed Jul 21, 2010 6:32 am

smallvolume123 wrote:I love the name of this piece. Reminds me of the time I drank too much Ripple. :lol:

would that have been when you were making all these comments???? :lol: :lol: :lol:
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Perfection is my enemy
Procrastination is his cohort
Persistence is my sword

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