'Down the Road'

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decadence
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'Down the Road'

Post by decadence » Sun Apr 12, 2009 9:57 pm

There is a flowing majesty in these veins
a refusal to lay low and lay down
a song sung only in my mind
The chorus is a decision
The decision is recording itself
The audience is all those that will follow in my footsteps

Down the road
I will go
Down the line
I will flow
Down the river
my boat will show
Down the ages
My mistakes will be yours as well

There is a blowing, windy travesty in these eyes
a renewal of need and substance
a vision viewed in my sight
The glare is a misunderstanding
The misunderstanding is repeating itself
The histories are rewritten for palatability.

Down the road
I will blow
Down the scale
I will know
Down the paths
I will throw
Down the ages
My beliefs will be yours as well

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Re: 'Down the Road'

Post by heinzs » Sun Apr 26, 2009 1:34 pm

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cusick
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Re: 'Down the Road'

Post by cusick » Mon Apr 27, 2009 12:43 am

Hello Heinzs It is a long time since I was last here
I felt like singing this. We are so ready for a change
How much can I get away with and still go to heaven.

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Re: 'Down the Road'

Post by Queen » Wed Apr 29, 2009 11:21 am

this could be from a father to a son or just passing on things to the next generation good or bad, cool. by the way your avatar is really freaking ME OUT! :shock:
No one is free.......if you disagree, try to skate board down the street....

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