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disease

Post by psychotic pretender » Mon Mar 23, 2009 1:50 pm

you ignore my dreams
with the utmost ease
whats wrong with me
do i have a disease?

as love redeems
so hatred seethes
you try to break me
what is this disease?

can you hear my screams
as i try to please
i know you hate me
am i the disease?
/My first thought was, he lied in every word,
That hoary cripple, with malicious eye
....
......................................
...... And yet
Dauntless the slug-horn to my lips I set,
And blew. ``Childe Roland to the Dark Tower came.''

Childe Roland to the Dark Tower Came

Robert Browning 1812-1889

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Re: disease

Post by Queen » Tue Mar 24, 2009 3:52 pm

thats why we live for ourselves and not for the kudos of others. good read
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Re: disease

Post by poeticpiers » Wed Mar 25, 2009 8:53 am

To fail to please
is no disease.
Unless you fail to please yourself
and it affects your mental health.
And this applies to everyone
and not to just you alone.
Some attract and some repel
you understand this very well.
The time has come to rearrange
the way you think. So make a change
Be confident and positive.
In short my friend begin to live
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Re: disease

Post by psychotic pretender » Wed Mar 25, 2009 12:30 pm

thanks ya'll

im so glad you enjoyed
/My first thought was, he lied in every word,
That hoary cripple, with malicious eye
....
......................................
...... And yet
Dauntless the slug-horn to my lips I set,
And blew. ``Childe Roland to the Dark Tower came.''

Childe Roland to the Dark Tower Came

Robert Browning 1812-1889

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