As it ends, it begins
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Autoprune 12 months.
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Autoprune 12 months.
As it ends, it begins
As it ends, it begins
Again…..Breathless, stifled, suffering, suffocating,
Release, relief, brief moments of regret,
Spiritual neglect, forgive and forget them,
Loveless light, chest heavy, anxious, caged, enraged,
explosion eminent implosion,
the precipice of collapse,
perhaps waiting to die,
definitely wondering why,
tired with "why",
choking on "why",
just need a little because, because,
lyrics of love fall on def ears
listening, wishing I could feel again,
praying for all to end
and then what
I wake up
What then and
End to all for praying
Again feel, could I? Whishing, listening
ears def, on fall love of lyrics
Because, because. Little a need, just
why?…. on choking,
why?....with tired,
why. Wondering definitely,
die? To waiting perhaps?
Collapse of precipice, the
Implosion eminent, explosion
Enraged, caged, anxious, heavy chest, light, loveless
them, forget and forgive, neglect spiritual,
Regret of moments, brief relief, release
Suffocating, suffering, stifled, Breathless….. Again
Again…..Breathless, stifled, suffering, suffocating,
Release, relief, brief moments of regret,
Spiritual neglect, forgive and forget them,
Loveless light, chest heavy, anxious, caged, enraged,
explosion eminent implosion,
the precipice of collapse,
perhaps waiting to die,
definitely wondering why,
tired with "why",
choking on "why",
just need a little because, because,
lyrics of love fall on def ears
listening, wishing I could feel again,
praying for all to end
and then what
I wake up
What then and
End to all for praying
Again feel, could I? Whishing, listening
ears def, on fall love of lyrics
Because, because. Little a need, just
why?…. on choking,
why?....with tired,
why. Wondering definitely,
die? To waiting perhaps?
Collapse of precipice, the
Implosion eminent, explosion
Enraged, caged, anxious, heavy chest, light, loveless
them, forget and forgive, neglect spiritual,
Regret of moments, brief relief, release
Suffocating, suffering, stifled, Breathless….. Again
Last edited by Queen on Mon Feb 23, 2009 8:54 am, edited 2 times in total.
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Re: As it ends, it begins
this can be read backwards and it still says the same thing, hence the title
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Re: As it ends, it begins
that is so cool!..i love it!
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presepis? do you mean precipice?
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Re: As it ends, it begins
yes i totally could not figure out how to spell that thanks hienze
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Re: As it ends, it begins
thanks for reading moonflower
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Re: As it ends, it begins
Clever piece of work the staccato tone adds emphasis evoking the feeling of a nightmare from which there is no escape
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Re: As it ends, it begins
poeticipers, you are so right it was supposed to be like and unending nightmare! sometimes i think we all feel trapped in a hopeless situation that just seems to keep going in an unending circle
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