As it ends, it begins

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As it ends, it begins

Post by Queen » Sun Feb 22, 2009 6:40 pm

As it ends, it begins

Again…..Breathless, stifled, suffering, suffocating,
Release, relief, brief moments of regret,
Spiritual neglect, forgive and forget them,
Loveless light, chest heavy, anxious, caged, enraged,
explosion eminent implosion,
the precipice of collapse,
perhaps waiting to die,
definitely wondering why,
tired with "why",
choking on "why",
just need a little because, because,
lyrics of love fall on def ears
listening, wishing I could feel again,
praying for all to end
and then what
I wake up
What then and
End to all for praying
Again feel, could I? Whishing, listening
ears def, on fall love of lyrics
Because, because. Little a need, just
why?…. on choking,
why?....with tired,
why. Wondering definitely,
die? To waiting perhaps?
Collapse of precipice, the
Implosion eminent, explosion
Enraged, caged, anxious, heavy chest, light, loveless
them, forget and forgive, neglect spiritual,
Regret of moments, brief relief, release
Suffocating, suffering, stifled, Breathless….. Again
Last edited by Queen on Mon Feb 23, 2009 8:54 am, edited 2 times in total.
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Re: As it ends, it begins

Post by Queen » Sun Feb 22, 2009 6:45 pm

this can be read backwards and it still says the same thing, hence the title :roll:
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Re: As it ends, it begins

Post by moonflower » Sun Feb 22, 2009 7:30 pm

that is so cool!..i love it! :thumbsup: :grin:
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Re: As it ends, it begins

Post by heinzs » Sun Feb 22, 2009 11:00 pm

presepis? do you mean precipice?

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Re: As it ends, it begins

Post by Queen » Mon Feb 23, 2009 8:53 am

yes i totally could not figure out how to spell that thanks hienze
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Re: As it ends, it begins

Post by Queen » Mon Feb 23, 2009 8:54 am

thanks for reading moonflower :bow: :bow:
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Re: As it ends, it begins

Post by poeticpiers » Sun Mar 01, 2009 8:38 am

Clever piece of work the staccato tone adds emphasis evoking the feeling of a nightmare from which there is no escape
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Re: As it ends, it begins

Post by Queen » Tue Mar 24, 2009 3:50 pm

poeticipers, you are so right it was supposed to be like and unending nightmare! sometimes i think we all feel trapped in a hopeless situation that just seems to keep going in an unending circle :cheers:
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