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inspired8
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Post by inspired8 » Tue Dec 09, 2008 9:05 pm

Wondrous pages

Illicit of sorts

Many the faces

Feelings do court



Conscious deep streams

Far away verse

Reality's dreams

Nightmarish curse



Chaptered for many

Authored by one

Touching souls ready

Blind eyes have shun...



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Re: Journal

Post by LostNight » Tue Dec 09, 2008 10:57 pm

I really like the message and image of this one. I can see oneself hunched over with a dim light searching for the right stanza, set for the completion. :grin:
The wheels of time
how ever slow
speeds up
as we grow

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So much be said
with so few words

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