am I supposed to? or not?

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wadley gurl
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am I supposed to? or not?

Post by wadley gurl » Sun Nov 30, 2008 10:33 am

I wake up at night in your arms
but..for some reason..I don't feel right
I don't feel safe like I'm supposed to.
I don't love you like I'm supposed to..
I just don't get why I should leave or should
I just should try to love him?
Then their was a scream....in the night
..her scream.....because he stabbed her
in the heart....

[by:Tiffany {my cousin}]
Love looks not with the eyes but with the mind
-Helena-
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Re: am I supposed to? or not?

Post by heinzs » Sat Dec 13, 2008 12:22 pm

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Re: am I supposed to? or not?

Post by poeticpiers » Sun Dec 14, 2008 4:55 am

strange but compelling write. i wonder what prompted it
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Re: am I supposed to? or not?

Post by wadley gurl » Mon Dec 15, 2008 6:12 am

thank you both.i do not know what prompted it.
my cousin came up with it and she let me posted it on here.
she doesn't think she can write poetry though.
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