Into the wild hidden track

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Into the wild hidden track

Post by nrip4life » Sat Nov 15, 2008 1:34 am

speaking simple doesn't sound fancy
but how the simple is adequate
stop looking around
just listen to the sounds
admiring the beauty of little
when too much is so often everywhere
vibrations are life
the blue in the sky speaks
the night atmosphere sooths
everything else is gone for now
if words were emotion
oh how they would say nothing
and yet speak so powerfully
simply nothing enough
i am that i am... i heard
the wind once told me
and i said through nothing
i am with you
while letting go of everything
it is received what those who
have everything strive to still have
direction leads in no direction
but where we are now
never alone when alone
the end of the road led a beginning
so found when lost and at the last moment
pondering the thought i was found before
nothingness of everything for now
im here we are here
No more no less
just naturally humanistic....
Old too soon, smart too late....-anonymous

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Re: Into the wild hidden track

Post by heinzs » Wed Nov 19, 2008 2:13 pm

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Re: Into the wild hidden track

Post by nrip4life » Sat Dec 13, 2008 4:43 pm

:thumbsup:
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Post by heinzs » Sun Dec 14, 2008 11:34 am

Yes, we are still alive... somewhere lost on the Pages... lol.
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Re: Into the wild hidden track

Post by poeticpiers » Tue Dec 16, 2008 4:15 am

We are all on the same journey whether or not we see the way ahead
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Re: Into the wild hidden track

Post by Queen » Wed Dec 17, 2008 9:33 pm

good answer for the meaning of life! "just because" no real reason we're just here cuz that's how it is. sometimes no answer is the most truthful answere of all. i like the flow of your poem too by the way!
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Re: Into the wild hidden track

Post by northstar » Fri Dec 19, 2008 1:21 pm

:grin:
greetings
i saw the body of your spirit ..my friend
sometimes you scared me
sometimes i touch you..sometimes i love you

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Re: Into the wild hidden track

Post by nrip4life » Sat Dec 20, 2008 2:03 am

to all of you......as long as we can relate we live :thumbsup:
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Re: Into the wild hidden track

Post by moonflower » Sat Dec 20, 2008 11:28 am

i agree with everyone!..i LOVE these lines..

"the blue in the sky speaks
the night atmosphere sooths
everything else is gone for now"

throughly enjoyed this! :thumbsup: :hello:
inside each soul there is music...let the music play..

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