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Post by heinzs » Tue Jan 01, 2008 10:18 pm

Life is a microcosm
a speck in the universe
are we all there is?
Inconcievable
yet if it is true
then what purpose is there
if there is no God?

Thought is the message
traveling through space
faster than light.
In a nanosecond
I am on Mars looking at
that blue speck in the distance
and then I am at the very edge of the galaxy
gazing inward at the sea of stars.

I have no substance
yet I am trapped on this physical plane
in a vehicle not of my choosing
and I am afraid
of achieving my freedom.
Even the caged bird sings...
why?
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Post by psychotic pretender » Wed Jan 02, 2008 7:10 am

wow

stunning piece man, truly
/My first thought was, he lied in every word,
That hoary cripple, with malicious eye
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...... And yet
Dauntless the slug-horn to my lips I set,
And blew. ``Childe Roland to the Dark Tower came.''

Childe Roland to the Dark Tower Came

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Post by heinzs » Wed Jan 02, 2008 12:54 pm

This was written as a "stream of consciousness" workshop for Jade's site. Sometimes these pieces lack cohesiveness... as such a "stream" might tend to do. I always like it when they turn around and close themselves.

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Post by running wolf » Fri Jan 04, 2008 4:01 pm

lacks cohesivenes?.....~grins~....sounds a great deal like the medicine mans walk to me my friend, questions and answers, peering through the veil for just moments.....a stream of consiousness.....enjoyed this

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Post by heinzs » Fri Jan 04, 2008 4:04 pm

:hello: :hello: :mrgreen:

Many moons have passed, old friend.
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Post by running wolf » Fri Jan 04, 2008 4:07 pm

yes they have, i have returned to the wild places again, and have few visits to the web these days, my totem walk with the raven spirit takes me to many strange places....we all evolve....

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Post by heinzs » Sat Jan 24, 2009 1:24 pm

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Post by poeticpiers » Wed Jan 28, 2009 3:42 pm

Not so much trapped as taking part in an educational process Consciousness involves much more than everyday reality
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Post by cglabb » Sun Feb 08, 2009 4:54 pm

then what purpose is there
if there is no God?

You always make one think a little more than one wants to...lol.
Nice piece, brother.
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Post by heinzs » Sun Feb 08, 2009 6:34 pm

CG!!! OMG!!!

Thanks bro! Miss you.


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Post by soular » Mon Feb 09, 2009 10:30 pm

Sounds like "eternity is in a moment" or "forever is now"...
Speedy write yet can be read in a lifetime. Nice.

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Post by PsychoPoet » Tue Feb 10, 2009 11:28 am

I know why...
This is brilliant. As always. Same as it ever was...
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