The Cricket
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Autoprune 12 months.
- nekot
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The Cricket
The Cricket
A cricket sat upon
My golden glasses rim
He looked me in the eye
And I looked back at him
His eyes were big and round
One eyelid blinked a wink
I gazed at him and asked
"What is it that you think?"
He bobbed his head, stroked his legs
Playing a solemn tune
Then he answered wisely
Beneath the silver moon
"My life it may be short
Yet I work day and night
My melodies I play
With great purpose and delight
For those in wood and town
The two-legged creatures great
Reminding them that if I cease
They'll know it is too late."
He hopped right off my glasses
And sauntered to the trees
At night now when I hear him
I bow upon my knees
september 15, 2oo7
A cricket sat upon
My golden glasses rim
He looked me in the eye
And I looked back at him
His eyes were big and round
One eyelid blinked a wink
I gazed at him and asked
"What is it that you think?"
He bobbed his head, stroked his legs
Playing a solemn tune
Then he answered wisely
Beneath the silver moon
"My life it may be short
Yet I work day and night
My melodies I play
With great purpose and delight
For those in wood and town
The two-legged creatures great
Reminding them that if I cease
They'll know it is too late."
He hopped right off my glasses
And sauntered to the trees
At night now when I hear him
I bow upon my knees
september 15, 2oo7
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It's lovely Nekot...
It makes me think of, what we call over here, a comptine...(a short counting rhyme for children)
Your words flow easily and carry a sweet message...
I enjoyed the read...
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Enjoyed this one nekot and I think I get the message ... long may the songs continue
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"Forever is short thought when your skipping this close to the edge".
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"Forever is short thought when your skipping this close to the edge".
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Re: The Cricket
Funny how the music of the cricket surrounds you while the source remains hidden. Fortunately for me the source of this song jumped in front of me...
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- nekot
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Re: The Cricket
Thanks Tom!
PS: Sojourner (a member here) put art to this poem. I am beyond honored:
http://coroflot.com/public/individual_f ... &sort_by=1&
Soj creates many fine works...in prose and images...and I imagine in buildings as well.
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