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Post by gordy » Tue Aug 06, 2002 4:14 pm

Alliterating


Alliterations always abound
Big bountiful bunches
Careen carelessly constantly
Dancing. Doting dictations
Extracted exquisitely eloquently
Falling free from
Gordy’s grand gardenesque
Heart, his hand
Inscribes ink inklings
Jotting jolly jingles
Knitting, kneading knifing
Love letters lovely
Musical musings maybe
Not necessarily neat
Or orderly only
Pure personal ponderings
Questions quietly quoted
Restless ramblings recorded
Silent screaming syllables
Tossed together triumphantly
Unique unions unleashed
Vibrant victorious verses
Whispering while wailing
Exuberant exaltations exclaiming
Youthfulness yet yearning
Zestfully zigging-n zagging

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Post by moonflower » Wed Aug 07, 2002 7:44 am

hey gordy..this is so great!..i love that its not just an ABC poem..it has meaning and tells a story..has depth and insight..how did you get to be sooooo talented anyway, huh huh??..lol..
seriously now, i really enjoyed this one... [img]images/smiles/icon_smile.gif[/img]

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Post by Moongem » Thu Aug 08, 2002 10:50 pm

Hahahaaaahaaha, oh, Gordy, this IS a masterpiece of alliteration! I especially like:

Extracted exquisitely eloquently
Falling free from
Gordy’s grand gardenesque
Heart, his hand
Inscribes ink inklings
Jotting jolly jingles
Knitting, kneading knifing

and then the tension builds, craziness abounds, crashings and

Silent screaming syllables
Tossed together triumphantly
Unique unions unleashed
Vibrant victorious verses
Whispering while wailing
Exuberant exaltations exclaiming
Youthfulness yet yearning
Zestfully zigging-n zagging

I love it, and your spirit, Gordy!! [img]images/smiles/icon_smile.gif[/img]

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Post by gordy » Fri Aug 09, 2002 6:31 am

thank you very much, i thought i would get more comments on this one cuz i kinda worked on it more but it seems like the ones i just zip off in ten minutes or less get the most reaction and the ones (like this one) that i spend a while on, i have to keep gordying and gordying to get any comments! lol oh well i just need to get over it...lol...thanks for the kind words... [img]images/smiles/icon_biggrin.gif[/img]

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Post by bags123 » Fri Aug 09, 2002 6:36 am

[img]images/smiles/icon_biggrin.gif[/img] [img]images/smiles/icon_biggrin.gif[/img] [img]images/smiles/icon_biggrin.gif[/img] [img]images/smiles/icon_cool.gif[/img]

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Post by William Sabbath » Mon Aug 26, 2002 10:53 pm

Cleaver poem

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Post by ehli'schild » Sun Sep 22, 2002 12:47 am

don't know how i missed it the first time... when i got done reading i realized it was the first really 'fun' poem i've read in a while. made me feel pretty lighthearted. i'd probably even add 'zen' as a last word, as a comment. [img]images/smiles/icon_cool.gif[/img]

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Post by preston » Tue Nov 19, 2002 8:25 pm

cool poem

"Restless ramblings recorded"

i also like similes ... subtle semblances of similarities
metaphors are nice too

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Post by AbigailE » Tue Nov 19, 2002 8:42 pm

lol, gordy, i love it! [img]images/smiles/icon_smile.gif[/img]

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Post by gordy too » Fri Nov 28, 2003 2:13 pm

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Post by poeticpiers » Tue Sep 16, 2008 2:10 pm

Alliteration always amuses
Artistically aspiring
Alphabetic alliteration
applause and admiration
are apt and awarded
Poet of the Month
May, 2011

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Re: alliterating

Post by gordy » Wed Sep 17, 2008 2:16 am

absolutely awesome :mrgreen:
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My Jesus hung out with thieves and sluts and liars, which Jesus do you worship?

---Todd Agnew


Perfection is my enemy
Procrastination is his cohort
Persistence is my sword

---Gordy

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Re: alliterating

Post by gordy » Fri Sep 18, 2009 6:39 pm

:mrgreen:
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My Jesus hung out with thieves and sluts and liars, which Jesus do you worship?

---Todd Agnew


Perfection is my enemy
Procrastination is his cohort
Persistence is my sword

---Gordy

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Re: alliterating

Post by JGarrison » Fri Sep 25, 2009 11:27 am

love it gordy.
“What’s in store for me in the direction I don’t take?”

-Jack Kerouac-

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Re: alliterating

Post by gordy » Sat Oct 03, 2009 6:49 am

thanks
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My Jesus hung out with thieves and sluts and liars, which Jesus do you worship?

---Todd Agnew


Perfection is my enemy
Procrastination is his cohort
Persistence is my sword

---Gordy

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