Being Simply Who I Am

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carndo
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Being Simply Who I Am

Post by carndo » Sun Sep 02, 2018 9:45 pm

let me
open my heart
to my surroundings
find what life means
abounding within that mystery
yet having my feet
on the ground
discovering what I can
filling my head
with knowledge
in its truest form
walking those trails
yet to be discovered
finding that pleasure
in all I find
celebrating that need
that I somehow crave
and being simply
who I am

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Re: Being Simply Who I Am

Post by kimmyjean » Sun Dec 23, 2018 9:41 am

I liked it but I felt like I was reading in one breath.....
but still enjoyed :grin:
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