Poetry Pages

Thanks guys! I don't really like the flow of this one yet so I'm sure it will come around again once I get some time to revise it. It's hard to write about the memory though without ending up like bags ... :crying: Don't you know that crying is contagious... quit making me look like a big baby! :roll:

~ The way that I remember ~ Remember all the shows we saw, the drives we took Do you remember when you first held me while I cried? Remember telling me it would be alright As I let myself fall back into your arms And back together again Do you remember whispering words that used to be true Remember...

Oh I'm all for the darkside!

<center>You tore down my walls and brought me pain
Left poison burning in my veins
Led me to my own demise
Corrupted me with lies
And now I'm broken
A hollow shell
Imprisoned
In this
Hell

Thanx! I thought it got the point across quite nicely too!

Sweet! I so know that feeling!

<center>Found…

Still tied to the stone you cast
Cold and lifeless
At the bottom of your sea
…My heart

But I don't want to deal with it! I want to know that I won't have to deal with it! I think I must have missed it when society suddenly decided that was too much to ask of someone!

Nosh... hence the message in the poem... it's a one word summary of why I'm not so ok lately... Of course, it was back at the beginning of September, but I'm still feeling it. I'm guessing I probably always will...

Thanks for the save dear! I like the truth in this one.

No can do Jimbo... the wheels are somewhat spinning (little rusty, little squeaky, but spinning nonetheless) so I cannot break my concentration at the moment... must focus... in fact, WTF am I doing on here? Ahhh! Must go write....

an hour ago... told ya not all was fun and fuzzy over here!