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Thank you Debbie. By the way, I made it home a little over a year ago.


--Jay

I cut back on the drinking.

Heinzs, every Character in this story is real except for Tristan and his son. Marie Ormond was really black beard's wife and really did die of Gonnerha. I went to the town of Bath and reearched this story for over 3 weeks. That's why I was so sad when I didn't get any responses. :cry: But thank you ...

read it damnit.

--Jay

What the hell just happened on this post???? I am scared.


--Jay

I was upset about the story. I mean, I just can't understand why you were all upset when I went off with the cocktail waitress. And what was worse was when you broke into her apartment and tried to slap her. There's no reason to be so jealous dear. Let's keep that kind of stuff on the down low. But ...

My pickle does not look like everyone else's. And am I the poetry pages prostitute??? I feel offended.

--Jay

I do too Sam.

I found this story, and forgot that i posted part of it. So the rest is enroute.

--Jay

The East gate had fallen. The city had been fully surrounded by the British. Only pockets of French resistance remained in the battered city of Badajoz. Renault had no where to run. He stormed through the city pausing only long enough to run through any soldier who was straggling with his huge calav...

Moongem, I liked the poem. You're right though, your poem does have a rather musical feel to it. Ever listen to the Cranberries tribiute to Lennon? It's pretty good, but then again I love her voice; the lead singer from the Cranberries. But i did enjoy the write.

--jay

Lady, thanks. Plus my teacher doesn't really care. He's an old Infantryman and he always asks about the nightly exploits. Because I just don't know why, but I always have this way of attracting attention and always have some really weird stories.

--Jay

Very Good.

--Jay

Jaysie, Moonflower, Thanks for the kind words...


--Jay

Candy_Cane wrote: I guess anything related to beer and drinking you're pretty much good at it...

Hmm.... I think that Candy Cane basically said that I am the unofficial drunk of the pages.... That's nice. Thanks.


--Jay