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by Eric
Sun Mar 20, 2011 8:44 am
Forum: Love and Romance
Topic: This moment I'd give
Replies: 0
Views: 1445

This moment I'd give

What can it be that has brightened my day Giving me hope .. in a whole other way I have felt something here ... that I’ve not felt in so long To hold onto this emotion .. I feel I must be strong The laughter, the love, the caressing of hand The slightest of joke, the sarcastic reprimand The uniting ...
by Eric
Sun Mar 20, 2011 8:34 am
Forum: Prose, Stories, Roleplays, Story Poems and Epics
Topic: I did not sleep
Replies: 2
Views: 2707

I did not sleep

I’m tearing at my hair … asking the question why, So many nights just sitting here … I lay here and just cry; Remembering days of happiness …. days gone by so bliss, I remember waiting patiently … for just that single kiss: How can this come between us … living each other’s lie? It doesn’t get much ...
by Eric
Sun Mar 20, 2011 8:24 am
Forum: Seeking the Spiritual
Topic: Show me I deserve
Replies: 0
Views: 1310

Show me I deserve

So I have been thinking about tomorrow and what I have in store I have put together all the pieces, to even up my score I know what I need to do, to continue on this path To get back what is mine; and put behind me all of this wrath I thought for just a moment … I didn’t think that I deserve I thoug...
by Eric
Sun Mar 20, 2011 8:19 am
Forum: The New Members' Café
Topic: Don't have to Bleed
Replies: 10
Views: 4652

Don't have to Bleed

I have been trying to face, these things in my mind. I don’t know if I will make it, if I will like what I find. But I chose to continue, this journey that I am on. Please don’t forget me, when I’m fi nally done. You have been here for so long, as I was challenged through my days. I know that I have...
by Eric
Sat Mar 19, 2011 2:50 pm
Forum: The New Members' Café
Topic: Dreams your Having
Replies: 3
Views: 2192

Re: Dreams your Having

Thank you I didnt realize it pasted that way ... I meant to only post the one !
by Eric
Sat Mar 19, 2011 2:49 pm
Forum: Workshop/Critiques Wanted
Topic: Far Away
Replies: 5
Views: 4569

Re: Far Away

Thank you very much for your critique ... lol actually I worte that poem 20 years ago it was the first poem I had ever written ... guess its not bad considering that !
by Eric
Sat Mar 19, 2011 9:25 am
Forum: Workshop/Critiques Wanted
Topic: Why My Friends Are Gone!
Replies: 1
Views: 2810

Why My Friends Are Gone!

Where have they gone ... Why have we lost our friends? Why can we not hold onto ... the ones we love until the end? Why is this life so hard , to take so many lives away? Why can't we just hold onto .. our friends for one more day? I remember not to long ago when I feared for my own life When I was ...
by Eric
Sat Mar 19, 2011 9:24 am
Forum: Workshop/Critiques Wanted
Topic: Show me I deserve
Replies: 1
Views: 2707

Show me I deserve

So I have been thinking about tomorrow and what I have in store I have put together all the pieces, to even up my score I know what I need to do, to continue on this path To get back what is mine; and put behind me all of this wrath I thought for just a moment … I didn't think that I deserve I thoug...
by Eric
Sat Mar 19, 2011 9:20 am
Forum: Workshop/Critiques Wanted
Topic: Far Away
Replies: 5
Views: 4569

Far Away

Far Away The meaning of life is yet to end, To leave behind your love and friend, To walk Alone through the rough of times, And never hear the church bell chime, Those whom wait to hear the bell, Will find himself burned in hell, Approaching the darkness stripped of sight, Will learn that's still th...
by Eric
Sat Mar 19, 2011 4:24 am
Forum: Member's Poetry Books
Topic: Blizzards of Thought By Eric R. Garcia
Replies: 4
Views: 7518

Re: Blizzards of Thought By Eric R. Garcia

Chocolate peanuts ! ha ! I can live with that,
by Eric
Fri Mar 18, 2011 1:23 pm
Forum: Member's Poetry Books
Topic: Blizzards of Thought By Eric R. Garcia
Replies: 4
Views: 7518

Re: Blizzards of Thought By Eric R. Garcia

lol Thank you so much I am having some navigating issues haha lol
by Eric
Fri Mar 18, 2011 8:45 am
Forum: Workshop/Critiques Wanted
Topic: This Picture - (please critique)
Replies: 9
Views: 6812

Re: This Picture - (please critique)

I do like this. I find it to be utter poetry .... I myself write out of the " NOrm " for poetry standard but I have also found a way to convey a message. And poetry is just that conveying a message or emotion. You have done just that!
by Eric
Fri Mar 18, 2011 8:39 am
Forum: Workshop/Critiques Wanted
Topic: Legacy
Replies: 3
Views: 3538

Re: Legacy

I agree as well it seems one continous string .. not to much in the pauses or emphasis
by Eric
Fri Mar 18, 2011 8:37 am
Forum: Member's Poetry Books
Topic: Blizzards of Thought By Eric R. Garcia
Replies: 4
Views: 7518

Blizzards of Thought By Eric R. Garcia

I have written a 136 page poetry book with 50 photographs. My poetry is raw, passionate and real. I write to get it out of me, I write because I have no choice, I write because of the will to do so; has totally overwhelmed, my ability not to Throughout your life, have you found that you could not al...
by Eric
Fri Mar 18, 2011 8:34 am
Forum: In Tribute
Topic: Why My Friends Are Gone
Replies: 6
Views: 8492

Why My Friends Are Gone

Where have they gone ... Why have we lost our friend? Why can we not hold onto ... the ones we love until the end? Why is this life so hard , to take so many lives away? Why can't we just hold onto .. our friends for one more day? I remember not to long ago when I feared for my own life When I was l...

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