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- Sun Mar 20, 2011 8:44 am
- Forum: Love and Romance
- Topic: This moment I'd give
- Replies: 0
- Views: 1445
This moment I'd give
What can it be that has brightened my day Giving me hope .. in a whole other way I have felt something here ... that I’ve not felt in so long To hold onto this emotion .. I feel I must be strong The laughter, the love, the caressing of hand The slightest of joke, the sarcastic reprimand The uniting ...
- Sun Mar 20, 2011 8:34 am
- Forum: Prose, Stories, Roleplays, Story Poems and Epics
- Topic: I did not sleep
- Replies: 2
- Views: 2707
I did not sleep
I’m tearing at my hair … asking the question why, So many nights just sitting here … I lay here and just cry; Remembering days of happiness …. days gone by so bliss, I remember waiting patiently … for just that single kiss: How can this come between us … living each other’s lie? It doesn’t get much ...
- Sun Mar 20, 2011 8:24 am
- Forum: Seeking the Spiritual
- Topic: Show me I deserve
- Replies: 0
- Views: 1310
Show me I deserve
So I have been thinking about tomorrow and what I have in store I have put together all the pieces, to even up my score I know what I need to do, to continue on this path To get back what is mine; and put behind me all of this wrath I thought for just a moment … I didn’t think that I deserve I thoug...
- Sun Mar 20, 2011 8:19 am
- Forum: The New Members' Café
- Topic: Don't have to Bleed
- Replies: 10
- Views: 4652
Don't have to Bleed
I have been trying to face, these things in my mind. I don’t know if I will make it, if I will like what I find. But I chose to continue, this journey that I am on. Please don’t forget me, when I’m fi nally done. You have been here for so long, as I was challenged through my days. I know that I have...
- Sat Mar 19, 2011 2:50 pm
- Forum: The New Members' Café
- Topic: Dreams your Having
- Replies: 3
- Views: 2192
Re: Dreams your Having
Thank you I didnt realize it pasted that way ... I meant to only post the one !
- Sat Mar 19, 2011 2:49 pm
- Forum: Workshop/Critiques Wanted
- Topic: Far Away
- Replies: 5
- Views: 4569
Re: Far Away
Thank you very much for your critique ... lol actually I worte that poem 20 years ago it was the first poem I had ever written ... guess its not bad considering that !
- Sat Mar 19, 2011 9:25 am
- Forum: Workshop/Critiques Wanted
- Topic: Why My Friends Are Gone!
- Replies: 1
- Views: 2810
Why My Friends Are Gone!
Where have they gone ... Why have we lost our friends? Why can we not hold onto ... the ones we love until the end? Why is this life so hard , to take so many lives away? Why can't we just hold onto .. our friends for one more day? I remember not to long ago when I feared for my own life When I was ...
- Sat Mar 19, 2011 9:24 am
- Forum: Workshop/Critiques Wanted
- Topic: Show me I deserve
- Replies: 1
- Views: 2707
Show me I deserve
So I have been thinking about tomorrow and what I have in store I have put together all the pieces, to even up my score I know what I need to do, to continue on this path To get back what is mine; and put behind me all of this wrath I thought for just a moment … I didn't think that I deserve I thoug...
- Sat Mar 19, 2011 9:20 am
- Forum: Workshop/Critiques Wanted
- Topic: Far Away
- Replies: 5
- Views: 4569
Far Away
Far Away The meaning of life is yet to end, To leave behind your love and friend, To walk Alone through the rough of times, And never hear the church bell chime, Those whom wait to hear the bell, Will find himself burned in hell, Approaching the darkness stripped of sight, Will learn that's still th...
- Sat Mar 19, 2011 4:24 am
- Forum: Member's Poetry Books
- Topic: Blizzards of Thought By Eric R. Garcia
- Replies: 4
- Views: 7518
Re: Blizzards of Thought By Eric R. Garcia
Chocolate peanuts ! ha ! I can live with that,
- Fri Mar 18, 2011 1:23 pm
- Forum: Member's Poetry Books
- Topic: Blizzards of Thought By Eric R. Garcia
- Replies: 4
- Views: 7518
Re: Blizzards of Thought By Eric R. Garcia
lol Thank you so much I am having some navigating issues haha lol
- Fri Mar 18, 2011 8:45 am
- Forum: Workshop/Critiques Wanted
- Topic: This Picture - (please critique)
- Replies: 9
- Views: 6812
Re: This Picture - (please critique)
I do like this. I find it to be utter poetry .... I myself write out of the " NOrm " for poetry standard but I have also found a way to convey a message. And poetry is just that conveying a message or emotion. You have done just that!
- Fri Mar 18, 2011 8:39 am
- Forum: Workshop/Critiques Wanted
- Topic: Legacy
- Replies: 3
- Views: 3538
Re: Legacy
I agree as well it seems one continous string .. not to much in the pauses or emphasis
- Fri Mar 18, 2011 8:37 am
- Forum: Member's Poetry Books
- Topic: Blizzards of Thought By Eric R. Garcia
- Replies: 4
- Views: 7518
Blizzards of Thought By Eric R. Garcia
I have written a 136 page poetry book with 50 photographs. My poetry is raw, passionate and real. I write to get it out of me, I write because I have no choice, I write because of the will to do so; has totally overwhelmed, my ability not to Throughout your life, have you found that you could not al...
- Fri Mar 18, 2011 8:34 am
- Forum: In Tribute
- Topic: Why My Friends Are Gone
- Replies: 6
- Views: 8492
Why My Friends Are Gone
Where have they gone ... Why have we lost our friend? Why can we not hold onto ... the ones we love until the end? Why is this life so hard , to take so many lives away? Why can't we just hold onto .. our friends for one more day? I remember not to long ago when I feared for my own life When I was l...