Poetry Pages

oh wow.. that last verse is absolutely stunning. perfectly depicts heartbreak and how love can consume the individual.

hahaaa methinks you are correct, poeticipers.

i love the style you wrote this in. it has a very old-world elegance to it.

the title is brilliant. nice write.

Polarized leaning towards judgmental maybe you would agree I lack a certain internal cohesion as a borderline bulimic and excessive extremist parlaying passivity however if I choose to embody past and present paradoxes can you really label this direction inconsistent with continuity burdened by per...

i love everything about this! the structure and rhythm and its substance and message at the end.

it's better to have loved and lost.. blah blah...

anyway, great depiction of unrequited love. we've all been there and it hurts. youve portrayed it nicely.

nice read.

to write something with this much intensity and raw truth takes talent and skill. you most definitely are an artist. keep it up.

was this about the bell jar? i love that book! great write.

my inspiration wasnt as serious as that, but thanks for the response!!

The Lady Doth Protest Too Much When you look at me and smile the corners crinkle crawling toward sincerity and in that flash of possibility I know I could have you I have you and that’s enough So don’t you leave her Don’t you dare leave her Don’t you leave her for me When I look at you and gleam a ...

very pleasant read. a refreshing dose of reality. =)

i agree. very interesting way of writing. it's like your depiction was disjointed enough to mirror the awkwardness you felt in the situation. nice job.

you wrote with such vivid imagery and sincerity. good read!