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Thanks. BeeJay

June 2010

Many who seek light search in darkness
Of a mind
Driven by formless fury of fear.

---Baru Gobira

Looks like much that I wish to say has been said ...and said well too! Interesting & maybe I will turn to research Villanelle on a night that seems to wait for dawn and I can atleast blame bags for the discomfort. BeeJay

heinzs wrote:Tempus Fugit
And yet, over all
a lifetime is much too short
to fulfill each dream.
updated 4/4/10

Truth in its distillate form bears no dispute dear bro Heinzs. BeeJay

August 2010 I am not the burden But only the human messenger Who brought progress That spread oil, soot and smoke A wispy tobacco brown to the horizon A nature losing its green & sheen An earth scorched by weed & greed And water, that pride of life forms (Have you recently tasted it outside a bottle...

August 2010 I am real Hopelessly real What you see is the illusion Brought by living emptiness Fed by a hollow devoid of hope Nursed by a grudge borne in the DNA of man Frightened because I am nothing And bleeding red inside and outside Waiting for an end Around a bend That would be god sent I am re...

I was there at the funeral. The Professor had completed his innings and had often mentioned his enthusiasm for life far outweighed the fears of old age. He would have liked what you wrote. With respect BeeJay

Refreshing in its energy and a new voice is always welcome for the perspective it brings. Welcome. BeeJay

August 2010 I moved on earth and breathed its air Of pollen scattered on skywalk stairs And yet I couldn’t get enough of air That had once shown human care. Everywhere I went , I saw upon the hills Earth moving to the sound of drills And valleys soon became A barren barrow left to dry on a crooked l...

I am a little puzzled by many disjointed collages ...images as well as the grammar here and there which creates an unintended effect. The last line is something I like . "How strange that these moments Shall be gone by less time That it took to live them" Im sorry Im not able to make much of a contr...

Some writings brush the soul with it's shadow of truth. Nice write. BeeJay

A quite longing well expressed. Welcome Zahir to PoetryPages and I look forward to reading more from your pen. BeeJay

Glad it brought back pleasant memories. Thanks BeeJay

Thank you Winter Rose for understanding! BeeJay

Thank you my friend. BeeJay