Poetry Pages

Thanks Tom.

I have seen the mind and heart of the one that holds it, sometimes too close...too desperately close.......

Well Tom, I have seen the other half and right now, let me tell you, it is too far- way too far from the other. I shall keep you posted on the reality as the distance closes in. Deal?

Thanks everyone! So glad you liked it. Thief... a simple yes or no would have done. Now I'm just confused...

Winner: Poem of the Week: June 19, 2005 http://www.heinzs.poetrypages.com/images/at261.gif Are You Real? by GoddessErika Your eyes whisper Words unspoken Thoughts unseen Dreams yet to be delivered From reality. Your heartbeat surreal So untimely Yet in sync With my world. Your touch So lucid So gen...

LMAO! Quite the topic there ET. Definately an original!

I like that... Lee Lee McGhee! LOL

Hey well at least you didn't have to start kindergarten learning to write Anarcha Anastasia Basta! Hello... I'd like to buy an "A" please?
Thank god she dropped the middle name and left me with only 5 of them!

Don't really know where he gets all the darkness from... and yes, he was going to use a name, but since he didn't know your middle name, he couldnt use it! Cough it up though and I'm sure he'll be happy to revise it. He absolutely loves you so I'm sure you won't even need to bribe him!

Awesome write Someone!

Not an easy one, for sure- but fun! I've had a lot of fun with new styles lately since I can't come up with much else...

<center>In awe- I watched your shadow dancing
The candlelight upon your face
Mesmerized by your beauty
I traced your silhouette
Placed it in my mind
Tucked it away
My keepsake
Dancing
Flame</center>

Good idea Ven! Actually the only reason I gave it that as a title, was because I thought that was part of the "rule." Oops! Can you tell I've never wrtten one of these? I'm going to go back and fix the title now... Thanks for the suggestion!

Moments lost
Instantly
So unjustly your departure
So sudden your absence
I feel abandoned
Numbed from endless days of
Grieving for you

Your words echo
Over and over in my mind
"Undying" you said, then

Solemnly I toss the flowers
One by one upon your hallowed grave

Ooh ooh, pick me pick me... :hello: (I thought that would be kinda cute with the smilie) No seriously though, I'd love to be included in the next book, so if there is some specific process I must go through to achieve that, please let me know. Also, I work in the publishing department of a large con...

"I missed the exit
And kept driving."

...Ha! I love that part! I feel that way ALL THE TIME! Great metaphor!