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Very nice poem, Audiofool.
I like the change of tone between the third and fourth stanzas, then the revert back to an easier tone in the last. Kinda reads like a novel.
Good work.

Thank you both for reading and commenting. It's much appreciated.

I actually believe that it is possible to achieve a higher level of sight while still trapped within the confines of a human body. But that's just me, I guess. Ha ha.

Need By Davin Casey Once, I saw. Everything was clear to me. The truth wore my fleshy eyes, ‘til they were raw. The sky fractures, And the wars of reality are bare, Silhouetted against a cold and empty universe. So I stand - Amongst two trillion worlds and stars, all blind - An out of place and mos...

poetgirl122 wrote:Amazing, just as I remember your poems being.
Still an amazing poet. :]

Ha ha, I wouldn't go straight to "amazing", but I certainly appreciate the comment. Thank you very much, Poetgirl!

i liked this too! extremely eloquent with a touch of mystique. it kinda took me back to a different time. nicely done. Ha ha, awesome! I certainly accept "extremely eloquent" as well as "a touch of mystique" as very gracious comments. :cool: Thank you very much for your comment. It is appreciated i...

Wraith Chimera wrote:I love this piece!

Why thank you. It makes me incredibly happy to know that people like my work.

Poeticpiers: Yes, they do. Whether you want them to or not, sadly. Thank you so much for commenting. :grin: Greatly appreciated. Jetz: Yeah, I know exactly where those places would be. Of course, I find that the message in a written work far outweighs anything else, and the wording is exactly how I ...

Since Last We Met By Davin Casey Since last we met, I’ve touched the stars, Which trace my sky’s Decrepit scars. The forest has Abandoned me, And, afterwards, I lost the seas. Since last we met, I’ve partaken Of demonic Congregations. The angels have Fed on my flesh. Without a word, I gave my best....

a captivating piece!..had me completely glued from beginning to end!..not sure about the interpretation of what "it" is, but the yearning and the desire to obtain, or regain "it", comes through strongly..enjoyed!! :thumbsup: Thank you so much, Moonflower! Your comment means a whole lot to me, hones...

A venture into unrequited sacrifice... At least that's what I'm reading. It's a theme I often find myself taking advantage of while writing. Perhaps the reason I write about it so often is that it is so difficult to understand exactly why a sacrifice for another can go unyielded. At times, one could...

Prayer By Davin Casey Submerged below, you blend so well With deep blue seas, and reds of hell. Remarkable, isn't she, The Sapphire Queen? Truth be told, only time will tell. The image of your beauty Far surpasses the late monarchy. I've sacrificed my very soul To feed her starving, vacant hole. My...

xmartinx=] wrote:wow beautiful imagery there =]

Why thank you, Martin. I appreciate that you took time to dig up one of my dusty old poems, and gave me a good reason to come back, beyond just that I'm writing again.
It is a very image-based write, for sure. I'm glad you thought well of it.
Thanks, again.

"Gunslinger" by Avenged Sevenfold

"Panic Prone" by Chevelle

"Yellow" by Coldplay