Poetry Pages

thank you all for you words of kindness and wisdome. i don't think i'll ever stop asking that question

awsome poem i love your wording and composition and i agree insane is normal and the more normal someone is the more suspiciouse we are of them anyway. this is a great poem bravo!

I like the reoccuring theme. Really gives a feel of someone "pondering..."

that's how i feel about it when i read it too, good interpretation

kind of a haunting chant..... i liked it

oops! thank god for spell check! ( i should use it huh!)

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so is this in 2 forums now?

i guess if you can talk to a rabbit, anything is possible

and the smell of frozen asphalt! nothing like a broken hip to ring in the holdays!! i love the read very cozy

To dinner she wore
her pretty blue depression cloak,
her heavy black sadness boots,
a veil of sorrow
and for a finishing accessory she brought……
a whole bag of issues!

Waiter…..Check please!

go for it, big daddy!

sure... uh why

The thought of you sends me reeling for reasons why you left me dealing with unresolved and empty feelings why were you taken, from us The rage encapsulates my bliss thrust into wraths abyss my understanding, quite remiss WHY were you taken from us And now we live without a purpose shielding love so...

i think most poets feel like this at onetime or another, becasue we internalize so much

someone once told me "to be recognized as a poet you must be able to rhyme... but once you get them hooked, you can write what ever the hell you want and they'll love it!" this poem seems to be a bit of both. i liked it