Poetry Pages

HELL NO!!! That will never happen again! Actually, for some F**ked up reason, my boyfriend decided to dye his goatee electric blue and I cannot stand it. Wait... let me rephrase that... it saddens the crap out of me that he was so beautiful but now I can't even look at him. That thing just stands ou...

Thanks! If you only knew how it evolved though...

The problem here is grammar and cliché words I have to agree with pops on this one... no one word can possibly be perceived as cliché! And... he about hit the spot on this one too... the poet had a purpose for the use of the vernacular and non-grammatical "cuz". I wouldn't have used it, but it's no...

Beauty
Lost
Unwillingly
Erased in

Blue
A reflection
Born unto
You

Ok, looks like it's got the popular vote of confusing. That's ok though, I can still laugh inside whenever I read it... everyone else will just have to wonder "WTF is that girl talking about?" :mrgreen: But I'll never tell I swear! They'll have to beat it out of me! :twisted: Thanks everyone for all...

<center>**Archive Updated December 30th, 2005**<center>

Whoa... hey... I totally missed the recently added forum award for this... now I feel like an ass! But regardless... big hugs too all of you and thanx guys!!!

What do you mean now??? You can't blame that on me!

IO wrote:

I need a bigger role...

I think he was refering to me... and since I'm dead... you can have mine. Not that it was a leading role or anything, but it's a start...

I'm here in the background at least twice a week, I just don't always let you all know that.

Lost...
Upon an about-faced turn
To finally face you
...My fear

Thanks Nosh!

Nah I wouldn't call it luck... it's more like perseverance...

ah... I pretty much tossed this one out to replace it with part II, but thanks for reading anyhow! I think the other is much better though...

Forewarning:

Foreplay
Foreshadows
Formidable
Fornication