Poetry Pages

Actually, she only has only one more that I have ever had. I will be adding it here and then including them in the book I am developing. But more about that down the road. :wink: Thank you, Egypt, for your kindness. I have been sorry for the longest time that no one outside of the family ever knew o...

Okay, here is my "poke" :wink: . No words are changed. I just broke the lines up to appear to be more poetic than prosetic (?) :mrgreen: What I am offering is a way of posting this to General forum for maximum impact. If you like, why not copy and paste to a new topic in General? Anyway, here 'tis....

Kup, I need to ask a question about this. Did you once have this written as poetic verse style rather than essay/prose? In re-reading it, I detected a great potential for an epic poem, and as such, eligibility for the general forum, where I am sure it would get the attention it truly deserves. If th...

5. I Gemini Why this uncertainty, This fear, This unknowing Of the other me Who dared to conceive In my brain An alien thought, A strange idea, Seeking deliverance from Anonymity? Does this push, This thrust, This unbearable pressure indicate The abortive birth Of a monster; Spiritually depraved, Sa...

Dauer stood there comforting the weeping Zaktye, searching inwardly for guidance he needed. He could see the evil already at work in the minds and hearts of the four. Through the mental energy released from Lakia, he could sense the questioning of his purpose; and now Zaktye, only just awakened to t...

Ven, thank you so much. If you were to do so, you would be doing my mother proud, and me. :oops: I have been considering compiling my writings into a book and had planned to include her writings intermingled, making her my co-author, so to speak. It is one of those items the Procrastination has had ...

4. Bent Twig The doting father gently smiled as he asked his little boy, "Tell me what gift would please you most, and bring you greatest joy?" A chubby finger pointed out a brightly colored box; "Dear father, if you please, this set of building blocks." The doting father proudly smiled as he watche...

Dauer sat there for some time, watching Zaktye while she slept, curled up as an infant waiting peacefully, hopefully, to be released into a new beginning of better tomorrows. A tear again began to form in the corner of an eye and he quickly brushed it away as a mosquito, not wanting its sting to wea...

Dauer leaned against the far wall while the stories were told, expression changing little, until Dranik expressed his doubts. "Well, those were quite the stories. Now let me clarify some of your misconceptions about what is real and what is the smoke of the darkness. First of all, let's look at the ...

Amazing! Stirring!! Heart wrenching story written in too many homes and onto too many hearts. I would pray that this is created by your muse alone, not from life.

A wonderful writing deserving, needing to be read by many and heard by many more.


Dr. Watson

It is sad for such beautiful music to be missed by so many. I would hope that your tune would be playing the next walk I take in the woods on a rainy summer morn.

Truly enjoyable. Thanks to HeinzS for the bump to my world of vision.

Dr. Watson

A moment of silence falls over the little gathering. Dranik, in shock, is unable to speak as he stares into the deep steel-blue eyes of Lakia, standing expectantly in the doorway. "Lakia, my dear, so nice of you to join our little party." says Dauer graciously as he edges around the large framed Dra...

Kup, this was entertaining and certainly thought provoking between the lines.
Truly enjoyed.

Dr. Watson

Dauer watched the interplay between the stranger he sensed to be a Werewolf and the Elf, Lakia. "Hm-m-m was that a look of recognition in his eyes I saw?" he thought. Then abruptly the man ran off into the woods, toward the mountain. "Curious. I wonder if...." A sudden commotion interrupted Dauer's ...

Something about the figure leaning against the wall caused Dauer to slow his approach toward the melodious voice in the square and stop. His keen sense of all forces of nature and the energies that emanate from every being, caused him to look harder at the man. A wave of overwhelming sadness and pow...