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Jim you are like the invisible man [can’t see your name up]

Cheers pal

Yes thanks to you both Jim, maybe a footnote or intro its waterloo [the last charge of the guard Into the mist where the British stood up and almost wiped them out] Ninian Yes you are right sonnets do have a lot of leeway but I get your point I did just put sonnet as you said but I think 14 lines is...

This just came to me as I watched a documentary On napoleon today I wrote it quickly so any Suggestions please I wont take offence. :grin: Sonnet [the guard] Thou art my brave gallant's all March boldly, with sword-hilts tread. Arise and hear the bugle’s call, Honoured hearts, this day are led. Fly ...

excellent

Link to kyrielle, and many more poetry forms http://www.thepoetsgarret.com/repeat.html A far different variation is the: Kyrielle Sonnet As you know the Sonnet is a 14-line poem, and the natural tendency for French forms to link in some way. It also means that if we take a three stanza Kyrielle and ...

thanks Debbie very kind as always i do appreciate your replies
as does a lot of people here

yes of course move it freind maybe tribute
thanks very much

richie

another intresting form very well strutured

richie

MOTHER Bring me your cuts and I will heal, leave me your stress, and strain to feel. Rid yourself of those tears, fears, and pain; leave them on my lap, from whence you came. And when you are ready knock at my door come back inside again once more. I'll wait until your ready to advise then leave aga...

Not that it needs any but I for one could
Never critique such words my friend

richie

Pantoum: A French verse form of four quatrains that repeats entire lines in a strict pattern, 1234, 2546, 5768, 7183. E.g., I did this in the strict form PANTOUM I revision MY LOVE 1 So sweetly she still encompasses me now 2 among those autumns brown tints of gold, 3 leaving only her smile, all the ...

well you got me here never heard of this form but it looks
very intresting i may try it

thank you val, most kind