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Totally rivetting piece. Couple of continuity issues that you'd probably discover in subsequent re-reads, but otherwise well written. Attention grabber all the way through.

How does a girl write?

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First screenplay I've seen. Reminiscent of "Hitchhiker's Guide".

Id, this is scary in its reality and completeness... for an overnighter! Great story!!! In today's atmosphere of "zero tolerance" the school shoot-em-up portion could get someone into trouble (believe me, I know this from personal experience with things my son has written... let me tell you sometime...

Hmmm... maybe the audience has gone home?

Thanks, Nefertari. Have not yet "talked" to publishers... do plan to, perhaps self-publish at first (that's the cheapest route), but it means getting down to brass tacks and ORGANIZING the material (grin).... us procrastinators don't do that very well.

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LOL... thanks, AKD!

Keep them coming!!!

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I vote long version... but I'm an epic kind of guy *grin*.

This is very poetic prose... nice writing style!

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Love the strings of adjectives... truly picturesque!

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Thanks, Moongem! I never know what inspires these pieces, or when to expect them to come to me. So I, too, shall have to wait for the next installment.

Thank you, moongem. Obviously an immortal race of beings could very well inspire a sequel! *grin*

This was just a short inspiration. Glad you like it!

Hehe... I don't post that much here. The rest of my poems are at allpoetry.com under the same name. Glad you like the stories!

Thank you, Buttercup... I'm glad you like my little Angel story! This is probably a one-shot.