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This is a great write. Not only is it true of people that are newly married but also people who start in a new relationship. Great work.

This is a great write. You can feel the emotion in the piece. I can relate to this poem. Keep up the good work

I could not agree with jeannerené anymore. This is a great write and it speaks to you from beginning to end. Keep up the good work.

Great write. I can feel how much you want to be away from the person that this is written to. Keep up the good work.

I have a question....How?

Teen,
This is really good. You can feel the love that you have for the perosn that this is wrote about.

Thanks Teen. I am trying my best to remain positive about it all. I don't know though. I feel like he is avoiding me. I haven't talked to him since Sunday and he told me the last time I saw him he wouldn't do what he did to me in the past and that he wouldn't disappear on me again. That however is w...

Thanks Teen. There currently isn't more than a friendship. I am beginning to think that is all that will ever be between us. I don't know maybe one day he will surprise me.

I wrote this poem after seeing an old friend who I hadn't seen in over three years. We have a very strong history together, and I don't know how else to let him know how I feel. Will things be different, or will they remain the same? If things stay like they were in the past, it will be a shame. We ...

Thanks Moon. It is something that is very hard to go through. The 24th was our last football game and it was also the day after her funeral. It was weird not to see her running around next to the band, but I know she was there with us all.

Hey Jen,

This is a great tribute to your grandfather. You can feel the love that you had for him. Great write.

Lots of Love,
Spanky

Thank you both. I did give it to them this evening at the viewing. They really appreciated it. It is something they will be able to hang on their wall and know that she was loved by so many people and that she will always be watching over us.

A boy that I graduated with lost his 11 year old sister October 18, 2008. I got to know her by being a part of my high school's marching band. She was a great little girl and it is sad that she is gone. :crying: God's Angel: Emily Deem What a sweet innocent child With and attitude ever so mild She a...

That would be my mother. I can tell her anything. She is great!

Shave your head or grow facial hair?

Anything country because it can be soothing at times.

Spend the rest of your life in school or working at a fast food restuarant?