Poetry Pages

As a mom this hit hard. It is beautiful and even more so...knowing she's still here.

(surrounding you both with angels)

Just saw transformers 3 for the second time tonight. Its a mother son thing for Cole and me...for as long as he'll let it be. Hey lady....maybe you could start a new ritual with your mom? just a thought. Yes Pirates was awesome even without orlando. Reading the Girl Who Kicked the Hornets Nest right...

Oh I see. so love the ac hate not being able to leave it.

whats your favorite childhood memory?

you'd have a joint to smoke if you'd quit pissing on the pot plants.
missed ya

I like the message. I pray everywhere, I meditate at home.
I did not find God in church though I sought Him there.
I found God outside the gates of Hell.
I took His hand and He led me away from there.
THAT for me is the power of prayer.
Its a great message.

did not see that punch line coming. actually laughed out loud

Like air conditioning
hate not being able to leave the air conditioning

Okay so heinze wants us to talk... how about movies? Transformers 3 has a lot going on (have to see it again) Cars 2 was very good and I was pleasantly suprised by Zookeeper...not as bad as I thought it would be. Actually got to see Pirates new one by my self and 2 hours with Johny Depp is priceless...

barbie doll wrote

If I step off this cliff
will You teach me how to fly?

He did exactly this for me.

As long a they have beer to drink, ..get fucked,… and stay well fed

must be something more they need. My husband complains constantly.
Could be his age I guess. He's complaning two hours after sex...maybe he forgets he got laid today.
dunno
I dont see this as a work in progress its done.

without it she could never bear
finally ending this affair
seems like this might flow a little better than
It seems that this is just what's fair
After finding him in his affair
just a thought

you could have called this one 'marriage'. I remember when i could read his mind. I can remember when it was me that made him feel less lonely instead of more so. This poem really reached this wife. thank you.
croc

whats a sonnet? No but really...I never did get poetry just know when words touch my heart... maybe it shouldn't be a sonnet? I dunno! Like the poem.



croc

Thanks Bags Thanks to you I just became a "spring breeze poet"
the first time I saw babbling brook by my name I thought I had been given that nickname. If the shoe fits.
4 years 701 posts...and I talk all the time!

croc

:hello: "Dark magic's flying shadows past my door" tripped me up. Dark magic's "tossing" shadows past my door...or Dark magic's flying shadows "pass" my door? :shrug: the third line of the second verse seems to need two more syllables? maybe "caring, wanting hands" ? :shrug: 1st line next verse coul...