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Anybody want a BLT with avocado on whole grain?

Did I make you look?

What gordy said...
'Great emotion in this piece" describing the dark night (day) of the soul (and body).

I feel the poem is expressing emotional and physical pain.

Enjoyed this... Though "enjoy" seems an odd response to a poem describing death. But it also describes life. The poem brings feeling of the reality that life isn't easy. There's weight to carry, sometimes really heavy weight. I also feel a sense of determination and purpose. Maybe "enjoy" isn't such...

Stasis. Like before. Nothing new. Uncertainty. This time there will be no more initiation, no more transparency! But is that really me? Caging my heart? Restricting flow? A thickened outer layer of callouses? Such, I cannot allow. Otherwise, my heart mutates closes morphs into rigid linear planes. S...

thanks heinzs!

Every day, I'm in a new place. I awake to the sunshine, for that day. The bright beams dispersed from over 92,000,000 miles away, make landfall to each blade of grass upon this rock of earth and water crawling, streaming, galloping with life. Everywhere, there is life. Some still undiscovered by us ...

Thanks heinz and soular!

Mightfall wrote: ↑

Fri Jul 21, 2017 7:58 pm

Hey my friend, who I met in here!! You're back

Hey Chris! Good to see you. Thanks for the welcome back.

Hopefully I'll get in here regularly. Busy for the next couple weeks with pets.

Ivor's obit mentioned he had an interest or perhaps belief in reincarnation. (obit: http://www.writingsinrhyme.com/index.ph ... ivor-hogg/)

This poem conjured up a happy new life for Ivor...but not on a motor bike. lol

Beautiful obit.

I didn't get to know Ivor on PPs.

But can now.

Stirs many thoughts and emotions.

Beauty.
Disappointment
Gratitude.
Regret.
Youth.
Aging.
Fantasy.
Reality,
"You were my promised land. But God fed me with manna."

We are the ...abled-differently. It takes much effort to perform simple daily ...tasks. That fact is a given. It is not the ...exception. We know it well. So, we ...adapt. We don't have to explain or justify our ...limitations. We know each of us are doing the best we can on any given ...day. We fin...

Thanks soular.

For me, this poem exudes the poet's gratitude. It's almost palpable. And even though I don't share the same beliefs, the poem inspires that sense of gratitude in me. And a sense of healthy humbleness. The poem brings forth a feeling of comfort within my soul, almost a sense of safety. The feeling th...