Have to read again a few times to understand. Think I get some of the meaning. The form is unique and colorful. David
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- Wed Jan 16, 2013 9:10 am
- Forum: General Poetry
- Topic: Memory Hole
- Replies: 3
- Views: 2042
- Wed Jan 16, 2013 9:05 am
- Forum: General Poetry
- Topic: Details In Due Course
- Replies: 8
- Views: 3150
Re: Details In Due Course
A delightful poem. Light and easy to read. Very clever commentary on part of our ever more commercial world. A pleasure. David
- Thu Jan 10, 2013 9:01 am
- Forum: General Poetry
- Topic: THE CLOCK SAT SMUGLY ON THE SHELF
- Replies: 10
- Views: 4463
Re: THE CLOCK SAT SMUGLY ON THE SHELF
Thank you so much. I think loads of us poets are time-obsessed. I more or less hate clocks and one day I might murder some. It's that bad. Well anyhow, have a good 'time' while we've got it, eh? Shalom, David Awesome! Time...such a fascinating subject. Clocks..the old-time kind...beautiful pieces o...
- Thu Jan 10, 2013 8:57 am
- Forum: General Poetry
- Topic: THE CLOCK SAT SMUGLY ON THE SHELF
- Replies: 10
- Views: 4463
Re: THE CLOCK SAT SMUGLY ON THE SHELF
:hello: David, I enjoyed your poem on time. Your personal view of time speeding past is interesting. It gobbles up our hours faster than we'd sometimes like! And there is nothing we can do to slow it down to our personal pace. Before I can get a few things done, the morning is over! But I must conf...
- Mon Jan 07, 2013 6:46 am
- Forum: General Poetry
- Topic: THE CLOCK SAT SMUGLY ON THE SHELF
- Replies: 10
- Views: 4463
Re: THE CLOCK SAT SMUGLY ON THE SHELF
Thank you for reading the poem and for commenting. Have a great 2013. David
- Sat Jan 05, 2013 7:05 am
- Forum: General Poetry
- Topic: THE CLOCK SAT SMUGLY ON THE SHELF
- Replies: 10
- Views: 4463
THE CLOCK SAT SMUGLY ON THE SHELF
b’’h 1/4/13 The clock sat smugly on the shelf, As if upon a throne, Contented with uncounted wealth Accrued through debtor-loan. One thousand minutes from the lad Who tried some time to keep — Two hundred hours from the maid Who’d stolen off to sleep — And twenty days the afternoon Full washed away...
- Tue Jan 01, 2013 6:50 pm
- Forum: General Poetry
- Topic: Danced Alone
- Replies: 2
- Views: 1705
Re: Danced Alone
Serene. Easy-going. Intriguing! David
- Tue Jan 01, 2013 6:45 pm
- Forum: General Poetry
- Topic: Chilly - part 2
- Replies: 17
- Views: 7444
Re: Chilly - part 2
An elegant poem with a surreal turn to it. I admit that I don't know what some of the big words mean, but that doesn't Interfere with my ability to enjoy the words. I like the sound of them. The cadence is magnificent. David
- Tue Jan 01, 2013 6:37 pm
- Forum: General Poetry
- Topic: The Window Within
- Replies: 4
- Views: 2691
Re: The Window Within
This is a fine poem which I found very enjoyable to read. It has natural easy flow. Although I am not sure what the poems means,as a whole, I also didn't feel lost or confused. This is a friend. Not a challenger. Refreshing.
- Mon Dec 24, 2012 12:01 pm
- Forum: General Poetry
- Topic: My sense -- to some -- insensible --
- Replies: 2
- Views: 1518
Re: My sense -- to some -- insensible --
Dear Darlene,
Thank you for your kind words. You are such a good person. I have 4 stents -- last year I had a massive heart attack. The stents saved my life. Merry Christmas and Happy New Year to you and yours!
Thank you for your kind words. You are such a good person. I have 4 stents -- last year I had a massive heart attack. The stents saved my life. Merry Christmas and Happy New Year to you and yours!
- Fri Dec 21, 2012 7:30 am
- Forum: General Poetry
- Topic: My sense -- to some -- insensible --
- Replies: 2
- Views: 1518
My sense -- to some -- insensible --
b’’h
12/20/12
My sense — to some — insensible —
My words — too — indirect —
Misunderstanding — usual
Reaction — I — expect.
Forever I've been lonely, tho’ —
As if in prison cell —
What be my way — too strange to know —
Impossible to tell.
12/20/12
My sense — to some — insensible —
My words — too — indirect —
Misunderstanding — usual
Reaction — I — expect.
Forever I've been lonely, tho’ —
As if in prison cell —
What be my way — too strange to know —
Impossible to tell.
- Wed Dec 12, 2012 11:48 am
- Forum: General Poetry
- Topic: How Casual The Christmas Tree
- Replies: 3
- Views: 1890
Re: How Casual The Christmas Tree
Thank you for the good wishes. It is a 'mitzvah' to 'bentsh likht' with your old friend who survives. I like hope too -- but sometimes I lose it, sir... regardless: Happy holidays to you and yours! --David
- Wed Dec 12, 2012 8:11 am
- Forum: General Poetry
- Topic: How Casual The Christmas Tree
- Replies: 3
- Views: 1890
How Casual The Christmas Tree
b’’h 12/12/12 How casual the Christmas-tree standing In its stand upon the floor, bauble-bedecked, its Strands of lights bulging as they connect To electric-socket on the wall... And — branding The front door with good cheer — understanding The plight of men, the pine-circle — erect — Centered — fo...
- Wed Dec 12, 2012 8:07 am
- Forum: General Poetry
- Topic: I'm Closer Now To Heaven
- Replies: 13
- Views: 5486
Re: I'm Closer Now To Heaven
Beautiful message in elegant form. The whole poem is wonderful. I especially like how it all leads up to the last verse. A special poem, Darlene! --David
- Wed Dec 12, 2012 8:04 am
- Forum: General Poetry
- Topic: The Silence Of His Own Dismay
- Replies: 11
- Views: 6333
Re: The Silence Of His Own Dismay
Absolutely excellent! --David