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- Fri Oct 19, 2007 11:00 am
- Forum: General Poetry
- Topic: Time
- Replies: 10
- Views: 7289
Re: Time Brought Memories
I cannot disagree with your analysis.. though it should not just be in our prime that we live in the moment. Memories can be good, but they are false and there is nothing truer than now.
- Fri Oct 19, 2007 10:56 am
- Forum: Workshop/Critiques Wanted
- Topic: Wounded Dream
- Replies: 8
- Views: 3898
Re: Wounded Dream
a subject I could be none-more familiar with; hope to see more but rather that you find happiness.
"I´ve tear apart from myself" I have tear apart from myself
I get a little lost in that line
"I´ve tear apart from myself" I have tear apart from myself
I get a little lost in that line
- Fri Oct 19, 2007 10:44 am
- Forum: Workshop/Critiques Wanted
- Topic: the other woman
- Replies: 2
- Views: 2254
Re: the other woman
"she smiles to me from every photo of your words"
"in that sleepy hour I hear her in your touch"
I like these lines
Do all those "and"s serve purpose to your flow? If not you could do away with them
"in that sleepy hour I hear her in your touch"
I like these lines
Do all those "and"s serve purpose to your flow? If not you could do away with them