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This is really beautiful

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KJ

Thanks guys....appreciate the comments...sorry I did not respond sooner...been working way too much...lol

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KJ

Within a Connection of One Rise to tomorrow’s hope Reflecting within eyes… Of our befallen brethren Illusions become Layered in dreams Of multi-colors phantasms Procreating into desert spirits…. Northern lights Broadening their hues …serenity meeting with perfection upon dawn Planes of heaven and ea...

I think this is good....it does make me wonder what was in your thoughts as well when you wrote this....I think an old flame maybe that still lingers...

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KJ

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KJ

13 Moons of Destiny The City of Yesterday glows Under a Low tides ebb … lights shimmer from afar Amid Blue water dust particles Mirrored under strokes of midnight Within a thirteen moon cycle All that has been unconscious …is becoming conscious Star showers spray out in Infra Red Tussling amid a cir...

This is a really great piece but I would suggest some pauses or breaking it up....not using format...make it foggy

If you'd like I can give you some suggestions.....but only with your permission

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Kimmy

Lady Saturn....I have to say You Rock...love your poetry as always

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Kimmy

First time I have read you...beenaway busy with work...but excellent

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Kimmy

In Quest… Fantasia Eyes Tumbling inside Exotic cobalt waves Lost upon lucid dreams In quest Of a dolphins soul Whispers of… Evening melancholies Cascading athwart Blushing skin As we birth inside Each others arms Winds of a sea beckon Spinning a language Of giving and receiving Tides of amore Inside...

deep write...alot of emotion to it

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Kimmy

enjoyed

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Kimmy

Thanks guys you actually made his day...he is awed that someone thinks its good...

I told him it was but he said I have to like it Im his mother

LOL

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Kimmy

“Well do you want results?” “Of course cause…” That’s what I am waiting for That’s why I am watching TV It’s so mysterious When I think about it I want to scream!!! The minutes go by And it seems like forever I talk to my friends And I watch a double header I need to get out And I need to see the l...