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by Eric
Sat Mar 19, 2011 2:50 pm
Forum: The New Members' Café
Topic: Dreams your Having
Replies: 3
Views: 1128

Re: Dreams your Having

Thank you I didnt realize it pasted that way ... I meant to only post the one !
by Eric
Sat Mar 19, 2011 2:49 pm
Forum: Workshop/Critiques Wanted
Topic: Far Away
Replies: 5
Views: 2522

Re: Far Away

Thank you very much for your critique ... lol actually I worte that poem 20 years ago it was the first poem I had ever written ... guess its not bad considering that !
by Eric
Sat Mar 19, 2011 9:25 am
Forum: Workshop/Critiques Wanted
Topic: Why My Friends Are Gone!
Replies: 1
Views: 1565

Why My Friends Are Gone!

Where have they gone ... Why have we lost our friends? Why can we not hold onto ... the ones we love until the end? Why is this life so hard , to take so many lives away? Why can't we just hold onto .. our friends for one more day? I remember not to long ago when I feared for my own life When I was ...
by Eric
Sat Mar 19, 2011 9:24 am
Forum: Workshop/Critiques Wanted
Topic: Show me I deserve
Replies: 1
Views: 1447

Show me I deserve

So I have been thinking about tomorrow and what I have in store I have put together all the pieces, to even up my score I know what I need to do, to continue on this path To get back what is mine; and put behind me all of this wrath I thought for just a moment … I didn't think that I deserve I thoug...
by Eric
Sat Mar 19, 2011 9:20 am
Forum: Workshop/Critiques Wanted
Topic: Far Away
Replies: 5
Views: 2522

Far Away

Far Away The meaning of life is yet to end, To leave behind your love and friend, To walk Alone through the rough of times, And never hear the church bell chime, Those whom wait to hear the bell, Will find himself burned in hell, Approaching the darkness stripped of sight, Will learn that's still th...
by Eric
Sat Mar 19, 2011 4:24 am
Forum: Member's Poetry Books
Topic: Blizzards of Thought By Eric R. Garcia
Replies: 4
Views: 3795

Re: Blizzards of Thought By Eric R. Garcia

Chocolate peanuts ! ha ! I can live with that,
by Eric
Fri Mar 18, 2011 1:23 pm
Forum: Member's Poetry Books
Topic: Blizzards of Thought By Eric R. Garcia
Replies: 4
Views: 3795

Re: Blizzards of Thought By Eric R. Garcia

lol Thank you so much I am having some navigating issues haha lol
by Eric
Fri Mar 18, 2011 8:45 am
Forum: Workshop/Critiques Wanted
Topic: This Picture - (please critique)
Replies: 9
Views: 3580

Re: This Picture - (please critique)

I do like this. I find it to be utter poetry .... I myself write out of the " NOrm " for poetry standard but I have also found a way to convey a message. And poetry is just that conveying a message or emotion. You have done just that!
by Eric
Fri Mar 18, 2011 8:39 am
Forum: Workshop/Critiques Wanted
Topic: Legacy
Replies: 3
Views: 1940

Re: Legacy

I agree as well it seems one continous string .. not to much in the pauses or emphasis
by Eric
Fri Mar 18, 2011 8:37 am
Forum: Member's Poetry Books
Topic: Blizzards of Thought By Eric R. Garcia
Replies: 4
Views: 3795

Blizzards of Thought By Eric R. Garcia

I have written a 136 page poetry book with 50 photographs. My poetry is raw, passionate and real. I write to get it out of me, I write because I have no choice, I write because of the will to do so; has totally overwhelmed, my ability not to Throughout your life, have you found that you could not al...
by Eric
Fri Mar 18, 2011 8:34 am
Forum: In Tribute
Topic: Why My Friends Are Gone
Replies: 6
Views: 4557

Why My Friends Are Gone

Where have they gone ... Why have we lost our friend? Why can we not hold onto ... the ones we love until the end? Why is this life so hard , to take so many lives away? Why can't we just hold onto .. our friends for one more day? I remember not to long ago when I feared for my own life When I was l...
by Eric
Fri Mar 18, 2011 8:11 am
Forum: The New Members' Café
Topic: When you need
Replies: 0
Views: 672

When you need

You came into my life ... When I wanted so much more In a time when I didnt .. know what I was here for But I found myself falling ... into your heart still I tried to just fight it .. but I lost all the will I know you have issues .. things your going through I know that I cant help you .. with wha...
by Eric
Fri Mar 18, 2011 7:57 am
Forum: The New Members' Café
Topic: Tired of the Roam
Replies: 0
Views: 736

Tired of the Roam

I have been trying to see clearly in this world that I have known I see the hurt surround me now .. from things that I've been shown I have to try to make the best and drudge on through my days I cant believe, I can be hurt ... in so many different ways We all need to find protection ... We need to ...
by Eric
Fri Mar 18, 2011 7:54 am
Forum: The New Members' Café
Topic: Dreams your Having
Replies: 3
Views: 1128

Dreams your Having

Are you ok? Are you all right? You didn't sleep so well last night! I laid there as you tossed and turned, your movement had me so concerned Is there something I can do for you? Something to help you sleep! Because last night I swear I heard … and I thought I saw you weep Where are you going in your...
by Eric
Fri Mar 18, 2011 7:47 am
Forum: The New Members' Café
Topic: Why My Friends Are Gone
Replies: 0
Views: 672

Why My Friends Are Gone

Where have they gone ... Why have we lost our friends? Why can we not hold onto ... the ones we love until the end? Why is this life so hard to take so many lives away? Why can't we just hold onto .. our friends for one more day? I remember not to long ago when I feared for my own life When I was li...

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