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by Moushka
Thu Feb 21, 2008 3:12 pm
Forum: Teen Spirit
Topic: While I was skipping rocks.
Replies: 2
Views: 1491

Re: While I was skipping rocks.

the teenage heart isn't afraid of that first relationship before the first heartbreak.....but heartbreak is not eminent....the older I got, the harder it was to get close to someone.....as a teenager, a romantic relationship is new territory never explored....never loved and lost....etc Oh I forgot,...
by Moushka
Thu Feb 21, 2008 3:07 pm
Forum: Teen Spirit
Topic: Avarice
Replies: 12
Views: 4105

Re: Avarice

I was sick of the word maggots by the end but was a cool poem....was it a kind of synical look at "he with the most toys wins"?
by Moushka
Fri Nov 23, 2007 1:42 pm
Forum: Seeking the Spiritual
Topic: **I found my God in her...** Poem of the Week: 12.11.05
Replies: 33
Views: 7351

Re: **I found my God in her...** Poem of the Week: 12.11.05

I found God before I found my mothers wonderful beauty......but seeing the beauty in my mother and her love for me and her intentions in raising me have brought me intimately closer to God....she and I were verbally abusive with each other up until the day she died....It was God that brought to my a...
by Moushka
Fri Nov 23, 2007 10:19 am
Forum: Workshop/Critiques Wanted
Topic: Sacredly Profane Love
Replies: 4
Views: 1682

Re: Sacredly Profane Love

Yes there is a difference between the two....a very good message.....I don't like critiquing but one thing that hit me as I read it was that the actual word 'lust' was maybe overused but that might have been the effect you wanted not sure....I like that bible verse about love (patient and kind....et...
by Moushka
Sun Jul 22, 2007 6:37 pm
Forum: Seeking the Spiritual
Topic: Master Peace
Replies: 12
Views: 7830

What a loving poem. The love was overflowing. All that free love that comes from God is not stagnant with you. It's continuing, expanding, moving forward, growing. Life is lovely. I'm missing out on my child's daily giggles but God takes good care of me.
by Moushka
Sun Jul 22, 2007 5:27 pm
Forum: Teen Spirit
Topic: A Sorrow That Leaves You Breathless
Replies: 4
Views: 2312

Beautifully worded. A joy to read.
by Moushka
Sun Jul 22, 2007 5:17 pm
Forum: Teen Spirit
Topic: The Lover and the Perfectionist
Replies: 1
Views: 1455

I enjoyed reading this and reflecting on my own feelings as I read it. I crave, crave the truth and don't care if I can't handle it because I know that whatever the truth is, I will be able to handle it no matter how hard it may be. This is really deep, I like it very much. I am living without the t...
by Moushka
Sat Jul 21, 2007 5:51 pm
Forum: Form in Poetry, Classical and New
Topic: What Gentleman Would Speak With Stones (A Villanelle)
Replies: 10
Views: 4447

:cool: I'm afraid I don't know what 'A Villanelle' is though.

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