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by heinzs
Sat Jun 01, 2002 3:52 pm
Forum: Prose, Stories, Roleplays, Story Poems and Epics
Topic: December Burial (Re-Edited version)
Replies: 15
Views: 4474

December Burial (Re-Edited version)

Totally rivetting piece. Couple of continuity issues that you'd probably discover in subsequent re-reads, but otherwise well written. Attention grabber all the way through.

How does a girl write?

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by heinzs
Fri May 31, 2002 1:33 am
Forum: Prose, Stories, Roleplays, Story Poems and Epics
Topic: Tinfoyola3000 (space comedy play)
Replies: 4
Views: 2580

Tinfoyola3000 (space comedy play)

First screenplay I've seen. Reminiscent of "Hitchhiker's Guide".
by heinzs
Wed May 29, 2002 11:00 pm
Forum: Prose, Stories, Roleplays, Story Poems and Epics
Topic: The Same
Replies: 16
Views: 7733

The Same

Id, this is scary in its reality and completeness... for an overnighter! Great story!!! In today's atmosphere of "zero tolerance" the school shoot-em-up portion could get someone into trouble (believe me, I know this from personal experience with things my son has written... let me tell you sometime...
by heinzs
Tue May 28, 2002 4:06 pm
Forum: General Poetry
Topic: reflections (extended version)
Replies: 23
Views: 13241

reflections (extended version)

Hmmm... maybe the audience has gone home?
by heinzs
Sat May 25, 2002 6:28 pm
Forum: Prose, Stories, Roleplays, Story Poems and Epics
Topic: Digging the Bones
Replies: 16
Views: 6700

Digging the Bones

Thanks, Nefertari. Have not yet "talked" to publishers... do plan to, perhaps self-publish at first (that's the cheapest route), but it means getting down to brass tacks and ORGANIZING the material (grin).... us procrastinators don't do that very well.

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by heinzs
Tue May 21, 2002 5:10 pm
Forum: Prose, Stories, Roleplays, Story Poems and Epics
Topic: Digging the Bones
Replies: 16
Views: 6700

Digging the Bones

LOL... thanks, AKD!
by heinzs
Tue May 14, 2002 12:03 am
Forum: Prose, Stories, Roleplays, Story Poems and Epics
Topic: The Seasons of My Childhood:Part Three-Spring
Replies: 6
Views: 2552

The Seasons of My Childhood:Part Three-Spring

Keep them coming!!!

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by heinzs
Mon May 13, 2002 4:44 pm
Forum: Prose, Stories, Roleplays, Story Poems and Epics
Topic: The Seasons of My Childhood: Part one-The Move
Replies: 10
Views: 3051

The Seasons of My Childhood: Part one-The Move

I vote long version... but I'm an epic kind of guy *grin*.
by heinzs
Mon May 13, 2002 10:50 am
Forum: Prose, Stories, Roleplays, Story Poems and Epics
Topic: The Seasons of My Childhood: Part one-The Move
Replies: 10
Views: 3051

The Seasons of My Childhood: Part one-The Move

This is very poetic prose... nice writing style!

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by heinzs
Mon May 13, 2002 10:50 am
Forum: Prose, Stories, Roleplays, Story Poems and Epics
Topic: The Seasons of My Childhood:Part Two-Winter
Replies: 4
Views: 1937

The Seasons of My Childhood:Part Two-Winter

Love the strings of adjectives... truly picturesque!

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by heinzs
Mon May 13, 2002 1:56 am
Forum: Prose, Stories, Roleplays, Story Poems and Epics
Topic: Angel
Replies: 15
Views: 6298

Angel

Thanks, Moongem! I never know what inspires these pieces, or when to expect them to come to me. So I, too, shall have to wait for the next installment.
by heinzs
Mon May 13, 2002 1:53 am
Forum: Prose, Stories, Roleplays, Story Poems and Epics
Topic: Digging the Bones
Replies: 16
Views: 6700

Digging the Bones

Thank you, moongem. Obviously an immortal race of beings could very well inspire a sequel! *grin*
by heinzs
Wed May 08, 2002 2:44 am
Forum: Prose, Stories, Roleplays, Story Poems and Epics
Topic: The Diner at the Edge of Never
Replies: 8
Views: 4391

The Diner at the Edge of Never

This was just a short inspiration. Glad you like it!
by heinzs
Wed May 08, 2002 2:43 am
Forum: Prose, Stories, Roleplays, Story Poems and Epics
Topic: Digging the Bones
Replies: 16
Views: 6700

Digging the Bones

Hehe... I don't post that much here. The rest of my poems are at allpoetry.com under the same name. Glad you like the stories!
by heinzs
Wed May 08, 2002 2:41 am
Forum: Prose, Stories, Roleplays, Story Poems and Epics
Topic: Angel
Replies: 15
Views: 6298

Angel

Thank you, Buttercup... I'm glad you like my little Angel story! This is probably a one-shot.

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