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by heinzs
Tue Jun 18, 2002 5:47 pm
Forum: Prose, Stories, Roleplays, Story Poems and Epics
Topic: Alamiya and Levas
Replies: 12
Views: 3068

Alamiya and Levas

Totally sweet, KC. This is so reminiscent for me of the Andre Norton books I was weaned on.
by heinzs
Fri Jun 14, 2002 5:52 pm
Forum: Prose, Stories, Roleplays, Story Poems and Epics
Topic: Angel
Replies: 15
Views: 6224

Angel

Thanks, ec... I made her mute on purpose. Glad you liked it!
by heinzs
Fri Jun 14, 2002 12:17 am
Forum: Prose, Stories, Roleplays, Story Poems and Epics
Topic: Angel
Replies: 15
Views: 6224

Angel

Thank you, nefertari... I'm pleased that you think so!
by heinzs
Thu Jun 13, 2002 12:11 am
Forum: Prose, Stories, Roleplays, Story Poems and Epics
Topic: The New Kid
Replies: 12
Views: 5920

The New Kid

No ideas on sequels... maybe later.
by heinzs
Thu Jun 13, 2002 12:10 am
Forum: Prose, Stories, Roleplays, Story Poems and Epics
Topic: Digging the Bones
Replies: 16
Views: 6637

Digging the Bones

I think this is the original post, then I must have done so again at a later date. Here are some other comments: Lil Gray Silver Fox Poet Posted: 20 Mar 2003 06:03:pm Post subject: Digging the Bones -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- (*shudder) Another c...
by heinzs
Thu Jun 13, 2002 12:10 am
Forum: Prose, Stories, Roleplays, Story Poems and Epics
Topic: Angel
Replies: 15
Views: 6224

Angel

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by heinzs
Thu Jun 13, 2002 12:09 am
Forum: Prose, Stories, Roleplays, Story Poems and Epics
Topic: The Diner at the Edge of Never
Replies: 8
Views: 4351

The Diner at the Edge of Never

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by heinzs
Tue Jun 11, 2002 12:27 am
Forum: Prose, Stories, Roleplays, Story Poems and Epics
Topic: Firebug Christmas
Replies: 3
Views: 1452

Firebug Christmas

Part of your memoires... needs more.
by heinzs
Tue Jun 11, 2002 12:25 am
Forum: Prose, Stories, Roleplays, Story Poems and Epics
Topic: Vagabond
Replies: 28
Views: 14466

Vagabond

Hey, I like this story...
by heinzs
Sun Jun 09, 2002 10:11 pm
Forum: Prose, Stories, Roleplays, Story Poems and Epics
Topic: Dear Diary 98
Replies: 6
Views: 2686

Dear Diary 98

I'll do it for you on this one. You can use the edit function to do this yourself in the future, also to change the title. Title could be "Dear Diary", "My Diary", "Diary of a ______?", etc. etc. use your vivid imagination. Heinz [img]images/smiles/icon_biggrin.gif[/img] [ 06-09-2002: Message edited...
by heinzs
Sun Jun 09, 2002 8:02 pm
Forum: Prose, Stories, Roleplays, Story Poems and Epics
Topic: Dear Diary 98
Replies: 6
Views: 2686

Dear Diary 98

The trick is to put these all into the same string and not separate them as individual posts. They stand alone as single entries, but create a greater whole when part of the entire diary.

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by heinzs
Thu Jun 06, 2002 3:32 pm
Forum: Prose, Stories, Roleplays, Story Poems and Epics
Topic: Dear Diary (from an 8 year old's perspective)
Replies: 2
Views: 1235

Dear Diary (from an 8 year old's perspective)

Perfect! Now add submissions through the developmenta years and you've got a great piece going!

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by heinzs
Tue Jun 04, 2002 1:21 am
Forum: Prose, Stories, Roleplays, Story Poems and Epics
Topic: Tinfoyola3000 (space comedy play)
Replies: 4
Views: 2569

Tinfoyola3000 (space comedy play)

Not too many interested in stories or prose... mine don't get much traffic here either.

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by heinzs
Sat Jun 01, 2002 10:26 pm
Forum: Prose, Stories, Roleplays, Story Poems and Epics
Topic: December Burial (Re-Edited version)
Replies: 15
Views: 4426

December Burial (Re-Edited version)

I think the big section that starts "The first time...", with all those // dividers could do with being broken into real paragraphs to make it more "presentable" and readable. Think of it as prose, which it is, and let the paragraph breaks suggest themselves to you. As you are doing that, superfluou...
by heinzs
Sat Jun 01, 2002 3:52 pm
Forum: Prose, Stories, Roleplays, Story Poems and Epics
Topic: December Burial (Re-Edited version)
Replies: 15
Views: 4426

December Burial (Re-Edited version)

Totally rivetting piece. Couple of continuity issues that you'd probably discover in subsequent re-reads, but otherwise well written. Attention grabber all the way through.

How does a girl write?

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