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by heinzs
Tue Oct 08, 2002 12:44 pm
Forum: Prose, Stories, Roleplays, Story Poems and Epics
Topic: Teal
Replies: 2
Views: 1146

Teal

I liked this one... keep adding to it.
by heinzs
Tue Sep 17, 2002 9:01 pm
Forum: Workshop/Critiques Wanted
Topic: SON WORSHIP
Replies: 23
Views: 10752

SON WORSHIP

Was this really all alone since July? Shame! Thanks for "dag"-in it. (grin)

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by heinzs
Wed Sep 04, 2002 1:44 am
Forum: Prose, Stories, Roleplays, Story Poems and Epics
Topic: The Horse on the Train
Replies: 3
Views: 1409

The Horse on the Train

Gruesome and sad... what a commentary on the fragility of existence and human frailty!

Now I'm gonna take some anti-depressant medicine to cheer me up some.

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by heinzs
Wed Aug 07, 2002 5:29 pm
Forum: The Ravyn's Nest
Topic: I Am Here
Replies: 2
Views: 2018

I Am Here

This is a hard one to critique... for obvious reasons. Any of these expressions of personal despair are difficult to view as simply "poems"... because, frankly, they're not!
by heinzs
Sun Aug 04, 2002 4:15 pm
Forum: The Ravyn's Nest
Topic: Smoke Scream
Replies: 9
Views: 8685

Smoke Scream

This sounds like a terribly frightening dream... though I am fully aware that it is based in your own unique reality. The fear really comes through in this. Excellent!

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by heinzs
Sun Jul 28, 2002 1:23 pm
Forum: The Ravyn's Nest
Topic: Haunted
Replies: 6
Views: 2758

Haunted

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by heinzs
Sun Jul 14, 2002 4:19 pm
Forum: The Ravyn's Nest
Topic: Epiphany
Replies: 10
Views: 4056

Epiphany

Love this classical stanza... MORE, MORE! (misquoth the Ravyn)

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by heinzs
Sat Jul 13, 2002 10:48 pm
Forum: Seeking the Spiritual
Topic: If Ribbon and Bows, Who Knows?
Replies: 14
Views: 4714

If Ribbon and Bows, Who Knows?

Ooh! What a concept!
by heinzs
Sun Jun 30, 2002 6:12 pm
Forum: Prose, Stories, Roleplays, Story Poems and Epics
Topic: December Burial (Re-Edited version)
Replies: 15
Views: 4474

December Burial (Re-Edited version)

This version is definitely more readable. Thanks!
by heinzs
Fri Jun 28, 2002 10:42 am
Forum: Prose, Stories, Roleplays, Story Poems and Epics
Topic: Else's Dream
Replies: 3
Views: 1339

Else's Dream

mew
by heinzs
Wed Jun 26, 2002 10:43 am
Forum: Prose, Stories, Roleplays, Story Poems and Epics
Topic: Is this victory?
Replies: 7
Views: 2572

Is this victory?

That's what prose is... a story in paragraph form.
by heinzs
Fri Jun 21, 2002 1:20 am
Forum: Prose, Stories, Roleplays, Story Poems and Epics
Topic: The Paid Tourist vs Public Restrooms
Replies: 5
Views: 2530

The Paid Tourist vs Public Restrooms

Hear, hear! Let's locate the PR designer/inventor and string him up by his own rollertowel (talk about arcane and disgustingly unsanitary). I always use the "handicapped" stall because the door opens outward and I actually have R O O M to move around in without causing myself a serious injury (It's ...
by heinzs
Wed Jun 19, 2002 11:46 pm
Forum: Prose, Stories, Roleplays, Story Poems and Epics
Topic: "Chimera" (NC17, be warned/edited version)
Replies: 15
Views: 4560

"Chimera" (NC17, be warned/edited version)

I don't ;think ending on "magic" makes the line "cheesy". I honestly feel that writing, either prose or poetry, should strive for the highest common denominator, not the lowest, in order to make it last through the tests of time and varied audiences. Even the totally lurid Victorian novellas, like "...
by heinzs
Wed Jun 19, 2002 10:47 pm
Forum: Prose, Stories, Roleplays, Story Poems and Epics
Topic: "Chimera" (NC17, be warned/edited version)
Replies: 15
Views: 4560

"Chimera" (NC17, be warned/edited version)

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