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by Queen
Mon Jan 19, 2009 1:27 pm
Forum: Tom Watson's Whispers
Topic: It Can Only Get Better
Replies: 5
Views: 3549

Re: January 2009 Challenge - “It Can Only Get Better”

SCARY.... in a good way :cool:
by Queen
Mon Dec 29, 2008 8:22 pm
Forum: General Poetry
Topic: What's to gain?
Replies: 1
Views: 698

Re: What's to gain?

i don't know why this poem hasn't gotten any replys but it touchs on a very important subject! the cost of a life is not worth any price, it shouldn't be used to prove any point, and lives definetly shouldn't be taken over and over just because some leader doesn't want to feel like a quitter! americ...
by Queen
Mon Dec 29, 2008 8:15 pm
Forum: General Poetry
Topic: Questions
Replies: 1
Views: 846

Re: Questions

this sound like the "is there a god" question! also one that no one wants to ask. very interesting poem
by Queen
Mon Dec 29, 2008 8:12 pm
Forum: General Poetry
Topic: Coming Apart, Falling Together
Replies: 2
Views: 958

Re: Coming Apart, Falling Together

this sounds like it's about someone going to rehab, jail, or the army. it really seems like a calming voice is saying this to a nervous soul, this poem is very soothing. good one :thumbsup:
by Queen
Mon Dec 29, 2008 8:10 pm
Forum: General Poetry
Topic: The Moon
Replies: 4
Views: 1300

Re: The Moon

this poem could be about a vampire or a street person who does his deeds at night eventhough he longs for a diffrent life. thats just what i hear, but i'm kinda weird so....
by Queen
Mon Dec 29, 2008 8:02 pm
Forum: General Poetry
Topic: Raped, Beaten and Baking Cookies
Replies: 7
Views: 1746

Re: Raped, Beaten and Baking Cookies

sorry to sadden you moonflower but thank you for reading :computer:
by Queen
Wed Dec 17, 2008 9:37 pm
Forum: General Poetry
Topic: Raped, Beaten and Baking Cookies
Replies: 7
Views: 1746

Raped, Beaten and Baking Cookies

Thank you god for making me the lesser of the two For laying me at the whim of what any man may do Thank for making me a servant to the world Thank you god for making me a worthless little girl And all around the world it shows the value of my womb a place to recreate the earth and let all mankind b...
by Queen
Wed Dec 17, 2008 9:33 pm
Forum: General Poetry
Topic: Into the wild hidden track
Replies: 8
Views: 2083

Re: Into the wild hidden track

good answer for the meaning of life! "just because" no real reason we're just here cuz that's how it is. sometimes no answer is the most truthful answere of all. i like the flow of your poem too by the way!
by Queen
Wed Dec 17, 2008 9:28 pm
Forum: General Poetry
Topic: Mr Nobody
Replies: 3
Views: 997

Re: Mr Nobody

i like how you switched between a 1,2,2,1 and a 1,2,1,2 rhyme scheme,very cleverly done.it is often difficult to pull that off and still have your poem make sense, so good job. also i feel that this "mr. nobody" plays to our generation of wanting to be lil' wayne , paris hilton, or donald trump all ...
by Queen
Wed Dec 17, 2008 9:17 pm
Forum: General Poetry
Topic: Remember Earth
Replies: 4
Views: 1206

Re: Remember Earth

this reminde me of that old question, if a tree falls in the woods and theres no one there to hear it, does it make a sound. such an infinte question. i like your imagry of the boy and his father almost as if you're saying with all the things going on in our world look how insignifigant we are in th...
by Queen
Wed Dec 17, 2008 9:14 pm
Forum: General Poetry
Topic: Regrets
Replies: 2
Views: 1138

Re: Regrets

true! so hauntingly true. this poem makes me think of all the bad choices that i made that i knew were bad but i did them anyway because it was easier than doing the right thing. are bad decesions just lazyness? decisons we make because we're tired of the constant battle to be a good person? what do...
by Queen
Tue Nov 25, 2008 11:49 am
Forum: Teen Spirit
Topic: alone (Funny)
Replies: 1
Views: 1431

alone (Funny)

"Alone" Sometimes, when I'm alone, I think about Ketchup, Because I know that the truth is that Its just sitting there in a bottle, by itself. I'm pretty sure it's red. Sometimes when I'm with Ketchup, I think about being alone, In a bottle. Standing next to the mustard all day. by "chester"
by Queen
Thu Sep 25, 2008 7:11 am
Forum: Briefs:
Topic: ..911..
Replies: 4
Views: 1277

Re: ..911..

it's hard to imagin the fact that my 7 year old has spent her whole life in war time! she has never seen a day in this country that we were not a war! yes it's been about 7 years that our county has been at war now!!! thanks prez. sad and touching piece!
by Queen
Wed Sep 24, 2008 6:27 pm
Forum: Briefs:
Topic: Enough
Replies: 1
Views: 783

Re: Enough

is this hard to understand?
by Queen
Sat Sep 20, 2008 8:26 pm
Forum: Briefs:
Topic: Enough
Replies: 1
Views: 783

Enough

If wanting for your love is ugly
then i am a hideous beast from beneath
but if begging for love is lovely
then i am still that hideous beast

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