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- Wed Apr 29, 2009 11:42 am
- Forum: General Poetry
- Topic: Mingling Among The Mongers
- Replies: 7
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HA, i get it! that was great, just as i was saying to myself " what a terrible group of people" i got to the end of the poem and felt a little stupid! good stuff
if you do not feel that you are an artist then you are not! some people like to put title on things to make them selfs feel like they understand the world. but the truth is you may just be a person full of hate and anger and confusion who has something real to say, and that's important! you don't ha...
i live on a few acers and am surrounded by huge trees ( in the midwest) this poem so perfectly describes the aticipation and readiness for the windy season ( tornado season) i'm sure if my trees could communicate they would all recite your poem in unison great piece
Nose candy Rock and roll baby! Lose control maybe forget all about what really happens forget all about the unhappiness rock and roll honey! spend up all the money tired of living tight, tired of doing right Give me dance, give me drugs, give me sweat all night rock and roll nasty! don’t wanna be cl...
the flow of your wording is very well put together and reads smoothly. and to each his/her own, thats what i think, if what you do gets you through life and keeps your mind and soul joyfull and good, well who are we to judge
poeticipers, you are so right it was supposed to be like and unending nightmare! sometimes i think we all feel trapped in a hopeless situation that just seems to keep going in an unending circle
As it ends, it begins Again…..Breathless, stifled, suffering, suffocating, Release, relief, brief moments of regret, Spiritual neglect, forgive and forget them, Loveless light, chest heavy, anxious, caged, enraged, explosion eminent implosion, the precipice of collapse, perhaps waiting to die, defi...