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by Queen
Tue Oct 06, 2009 7:29 pm
Forum: Briefs:
Topic: Arboretum
Replies: 3
Views: 1449

Re: Arboretum

I read this over and over until i memorized it, then i recited it with my eyes closed so that i could see it in my head. i like the way your poem talks about poetry :mrgreen: what i got from this poem was the feeling that love poems can have any form of writing and still be just as beautiful to two ...
by Queen
Tue Oct 06, 2009 7:09 pm
Forum: General Poetry
Topic: Hide and Seek
Replies: 6
Views: 1452

Re: Hide and Seek

thank you as always bags, as soon as i think i have really found my self, that crazy b*tch in the mirror changes again! :lol:
Wblogan, your word make me search as much as the feeling in my poem!
by Queen
Thu Sep 17, 2009 7:00 am
Forum: The New Members' Café
Topic: Hide and Seek
Replies: 1
Views: 781

Re: Hide and Seek

in two forums... :mrgreen:
by Queen
Thu Sep 17, 2009 6:59 am
Forum: General Poetry
Topic: Hide and Seek
Replies: 6
Views: 1452

Hide and Seek

Hide and Seek Looking always looking, searching inside, searching the tide through watery eyes scanning the skies floating over truth skipping over clouded lies looking always looking, someone tell me why. Lost , so lost in the black following the smell of blood and lilac, hands outreached ready to...
by Queen
Thu Sep 17, 2009 6:55 am
Forum: General Poetry
Topic: Type The Words
Replies: 2
Views: 831

Re: Type The Words

i like it. don't we all just wish the people in our lives would give us a punch list of what they need from us! :cool:
by Queen
Thu Sep 17, 2009 6:41 am
Forum: The New Members' Café
Topic: your skin -that far away mystery
Replies: 1
Views: 686

Re: your skin -that far away mystery

keep playing with punctuation. i know some people don't get it right now, when they read your work but some of the best poetry is composed of wordplay and odd punctuation! :thumbsup:
by Queen
Thu Sep 17, 2009 6:37 am
Forum: The New Members' Café
Topic: seagull days
Replies: 2
Views: 970

Re: seagull days

:cool: creative.
by Queen
Thu Sep 17, 2009 6:33 am
Forum: The New Members' Café
Topic: The Poem
Replies: 4
Views: 1326

Re: The Poem

isn't that the internal argument that all poets have, a poem pops in our head and we say "am i to busy to write it down....but what if its my next great one?" such a little piece of truth. i enjoyed it!
by Queen
Thu Sep 17, 2009 6:18 am
Forum: The New Members' Café
Topic: The Truth
Replies: 5
Views: 1398

Re: The Truth

this poem is beautiful, i can really feel the lonelyness in the words. but the last line throws me off can you find another way to say "but no ones out to hear him" it's not as eloquent as the rest of the poem. but i really did like this one you could almost read it like a slow haunting song :shock:
by Queen
Wed Sep 16, 2009 5:16 pm
Forum: The New Members' Café
Topic: Hide and Seek
Replies: 1
Views: 781

Hide and Seek

Hide and Seek Looking always looking, searching inside, searching the tide through watery eyes scanning the skies floating over truth skipping over clouded lies looking always looking, someone tell me why. Lost , so lost in the black following the smell of blood and lilac, hands outreached ready to...
by Queen
Mon Jun 01, 2009 10:31 pm
Forum: Briefs:
Topic: gifts from my womb
Replies: 7
Views: 1752

Re: gifts from my womb

wow i don't even wanna think about that, my seven year old recently stopped calling me mommy at started calling me mom. not a big deal to most people but it shook me up :crying: :crying: :crying:
by Queen
Mon Jun 01, 2009 8:58 am
Forum: Briefs:
Topic: gifts from my womb
Replies: 7
Views: 1752

Re: gifts from my womb

:bump: my babie are growing up so fast, this poem is so fitting to me now
by Queen
Fri May 01, 2009 8:24 am
Forum: Teen Spirit
Topic: nose candy
Replies: 3
Views: 1655

Re: nose candy

it is kind rhythmic i guess but i would use spoons instead of bongos hahahahaha just kidding :lol: :cheers:
by Queen
Wed Apr 29, 2009 3:29 pm
Forum: General Poetry
Topic: Nose Candy
Replies: 2
Views: 805

Re: Nose Candy

i put this in two forums so if you see it again, you don't have to read it twice.... unless you want to :oops:
by Queen
Wed Apr 29, 2009 11:43 am
Forum: General Poetry
Topic: Nose Candy
Replies: 2
Views: 805

Nose Candy

Nose candy Rock and roll baby! Lose control maybe forget all about what really happens forget all about the unhappiness rock and roll honey! spend up all the money tired of living tight, tired of doing right Give me dance, give me drugs, give me sweat all night rock and roll nasty! don’t wanna be cl...

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