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by Joehanna
Sun Mar 02, 2008 7:10 am
Forum: In Tribute
Topic: Monterrey 1967
Replies: 24
Views: 7614

Re: Monterrey 1967

Lovely!
Tells so much about that era:)
by Joehanna
Fri Jul 27, 2007 12:50 am
Forum: Workshop/Critiques Wanted
Topic: Killing Him . . . almost
Replies: 8
Views: 3320

:)

I really like this poem. I don't think I can tell you what to do differently because it would be like telling some painter what to paint. They paint what they feel and I am pretty sure we write what we feel. And who am I to tell you what to feel. Again it was a story. And I love the words you used t...
by Joehanna
Sun Jun 03, 2007 8:43 am
Forum: Form in Poetry, Classical and New
Topic: The Years of Hard Work Are Finally Done (villanelle)
Replies: 11
Views: 5031

Hi

This was a good poem!
So much real life...well done!
by Joehanna
Thu Apr 05, 2007 8:24 am
Forum: Teen Spirit
Topic: Let go of the truth
Replies: 2
Views: 3260

Let go of the truth

I know tears don’t lie
And that must’ve hurt
Spread your wings
But don’t fallow Kurt

I don’t see any happy faces
Fallowing the light
There are just millions of cases
Who know he was right

But sometimes when it comes
It comes to hurt
And then only thing you can do
Is let go of the truth
by Joehanna
Tue Mar 27, 2007 10:04 am
Forum: Teen Spirit
Topic: Sweet dreams
Replies: 5
Views: 5102

Sweet dreams

My misery hates company
I keep killing myself in my dreams
And when I wake up
I’ve never been more alive
by Joehanna
Tue Mar 13, 2007 6:42 am
Forum: Workshop/Critiques Wanted
Topic: I was alive
Replies: 4
Views: 2176

I was alive

This pain tells me something bad
But I don’t mind
At least I’m alive

You tell me that I’m a fool
But I don’t mind
I know I won’t survive

No one lives forever you see
But I don’t mind
At least once I was alive
by Joehanna
Tue Feb 06, 2007 6:47 am
Forum: Teen Spirit
Topic: On my way
Replies: 2
Views: 3279

On my way

The other way down
I’m in a hurry
I have this golden crown
And it all seems so blurry

I have to hide under the moon
Sell my crown or throw it away
Because tomorrow afternoon
I’m already on my way

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