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by negatvone
Sat Feb 21, 2015 1:30 am
Forum: Workshop/Critiques Wanted
Topic: Until One Decides To Choose
Replies: 5
Views: 2434

Re: Until One Decides To Choose

I know this is a few year late to respond, but Gerry it looks good to me.
by negatvone
Fri Feb 20, 2015 10:21 am
Forum: Members' Poetry Vaults
Topic: Negatvone
Replies: 13
Views: 8938

Re: Negatvone

Pain in my Soul Pain in my Soul Skies paved with the fires Solemn embers to scream for mercy Oh simple heart's cries Leaves them on the floor whimpering looking for something more singling The one time we shared the lust in our eyes Now My soul slowly dies Pain, and torture so sweet it might just de...
by negatvone
Fri Feb 20, 2015 10:20 am
Forum: Members' Poetry Vaults
Topic: Negatvone
Replies: 13
Views: 8938

Re: Negatvone

Embers in the dark In silent mystery you sit upon this log Wondering why you ever Kissed this frog Transformed from heinous into view of sight Your hair brilliantly traps the light Something the blind can even see Within each heart there is a boundary You exceed them all Entrapped in your mystery Sn...
by negatvone
Fri Feb 20, 2015 7:42 am
Forum: Members' Poetry Vaults
Topic: Negatvone
Replies: 13
Views: 8938

Re: Negatvone

Entranced Memories Postby negatvone » Fri Feb 20, 2015 10:31 am You may say you do not believe me Listen Hear the whispers in the tree As it bends in the wind The way it contorts The way it might bend Winds of change blow upon our face Mostly mine In our new found grace I ready the sails for this sh...
by negatvone
Fri Feb 20, 2015 7:31 am
Forum: Love and Romance
Topic: Entranced Memories
Replies: 0
Views: 622

Entranced Memories

You may say you do not believe me Listen Hear the whispers in the tree As it bends in the wind The way it contorts The way it might bend Winds of change blow upon our face Mostly mine In our new found grace I ready the sails for this ship to sail Into bliss, straight out of hell My mind trembles of ...
by negatvone
Wed Feb 18, 2015 8:25 am
Forum: Love and Romance
Topic: Untimely snack
Replies: 0
Views: 671

Untimely snack

The smell of her neck entrances This is the spot my mind dances To find the force to carry or on The simple spot Where my brain does spawn These thoughts oh ravishing you within my tides The waves rock back and forth Between the tides we need to move forth. There re wolves that snack on a heart I sa...
by negatvone
Wed Feb 18, 2015 6:18 am
Forum: Love and Romance
Topic: Warm my brain
Replies: 0
Views: 653

Warm my brain

Warm my brain It simmers in Heaven's fires This lust my brain desires I hear every tick of the clock Tick tock-tick tock Time winds down so slowly All I can see is my heart Stopping slowly For every minute spent on you Beats my heart So prim,so true I prime this motor, and we both go out For this ri...
by negatvone
Wed Feb 18, 2015 4:07 am
Forum: Love and Romance
Topic: Embers in the dark
Replies: 0
Views: 604

Embers in the dark

In silent mystery you sit upon this log Wondering why you ever Kissed this frog Transformed from heinous into view of sight Your hair brilliantly traps the light Something the blind can even see Within each heart there is a boundary You exceed them all Entrapped in your mystery Snared off my path, I...
by negatvone
Wed Feb 18, 2015 3:48 am
Forum: Love and Romance
Topic: Pain in my Soul
Replies: 0
Views: 655

Pain in my Soul

Pain in my Soul Skies paved with the fires Solemn embers to scream for mercy Oh simple heart's cries Leaves them on the floor whimpering looking for something more singling The one time we shared the lust in our eyes Now My soul slowly dies Pain, and torture so sweet it might just decay My mind upon...
by negatvone
Tue Feb 10, 2015 9:58 pm
Forum: Love and Romance
Topic: A new dance
Replies: 1
Views: 649

Re: A new dance

Sorry, just something that fell out of my head. I'll try to keep my cranium closed.
by negatvone
Tue Feb 10, 2015 9:56 pm
Forum: Love and Romance
Topic: A new dance
Replies: 1
Views: 649

A new dance

A new dance Ma'am may I request this? Not to be properer, But I must Ask for something more than dust Gentile kisses go out the window You still to this day Steal the heart of this fellow Within twilight eyes we gaze This madness might be a gaze. My eyes hunger for more Where our hearts can pour. Wi...
by negatvone
Mon Jan 26, 2015 8:41 am
Forum: Love and Romance
Topic: Playing Dead
Replies: 5
Views: 1354

Re: Playing Dead

My dear God. This well penned. :bow:
by negatvone
Sun Jan 25, 2015 8:34 am
Forum: Community Favorites, Poem of the Week and Poet of the Month
Topic: **Just One Last Hug** Favorite 8/27/06
Replies: 18
Views: 11197

Re: **Just One Last Hug** Favorite 8/27/06

This is my favorite by far. Gerry is a wordsmith beyond anything I could ever do. I give props.
by negatvone
Sun Jan 25, 2015 8:02 am
Forum: Form in Poetry, Classical and New
Topic: Inner Conflict (Sestina)
Replies: 12
Views: 5845

Re: Inner Conflict (Sestina)

Buddy this is one of my favorites. This takes dedication. You have to be completely in the moment to do this style of poetry.
by negatvone
Sun Jan 25, 2015 7:42 am
Forum: In Tribute
Topic: **More Than You'll Ever Know** Poem of the Week 9/3/06
Replies: 18
Views: 8490

Re: **More Than You'll Ever Know** Poem of the Week 9/3/06

I give this piece of my mind to my Mother, She deserves it. She has always been there for me.

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