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by midnight_kitty_kat
Tue Apr 02, 2013 12:01 am
Forum: Workshop/Critiques Wanted
Topic: Haiku
Replies: 4
Views: 2003

Re: Haiku

:cheers: Woohoo success! I'm glad you liked it, I hold your opinion quite highly =)
by midnight_kitty_kat
Mon Apr 01, 2013 11:59 pm
Forum: Workshop/Critiques Wanted
Topic: The Last Curtain Call
Replies: 5
Views: 2300

EDIT*LINE 6

Hahaha oh my gosh, it's been some years since I've done this, I think I've fixed it. Of course if I've miscounted again, I'm going to blame it on the late hour. I saw where my mistakes were and I had to change some of the words. Smiling never comes now. Beautiful, your fallen eyes hold no love for t...
by midnight_kitty_kat
Mon Apr 01, 2013 11:38 pm
Forum: Open Discussions and Members' Messages
Topic: THE TEXAN
Replies: 43
Views: 5947

Re: THE TEXAN

Lmao this thread is too funny! I am so sad, I though I was a true bacon lover. Yet, it seems that there are many types of bacon I've never tried. Pemeal I've never even heard of and I wasn't aware that England had a different (supposedly superior) form either. Probably their pigs are leaner and in b...
by midnight_kitty_kat
Mon Apr 01, 2013 11:00 pm
Forum: Workshop/Critiques Wanted
Topic: Haiku
Replies: 4
Views: 2003

Re: Haiku

Aha I've reworked this one to be an actual haiku now or senryu i guess hah. Ever helpful you are heinzs.

My bittersweet Moon
Bouncing your bewitching beams
Soundless as night air
by midnight_kitty_kat
Mon Apr 01, 2013 10:29 pm
Forum: Workshop/Critiques Wanted
Topic: The Last Curtain Call
Replies: 5
Views: 2300

The Last Curtain Call

Thanks for the tip about the "So what is haiku anyways?" thread, I found it to be very helpful. I also checked out the forum explaining all the different types of form poetry which were also very informative. So without further ado... my first attempt at a rictameter! Smiling never happens now. Beau...
by midnight_kitty_kat
Mon Apr 01, 2013 12:09 pm
Forum: Workshop/Critiques Wanted
Topic: Haiku
Replies: 4
Views: 2003

Haiku

Ah My Bittersweet Moon
Drearily Bouncing Bewitching Beams
Soundless in Evenings Air

I'm not terribly familiar with any form poetry. Is this a haiku??
:critique:
by midnight_kitty_kat
Sun Mar 31, 2013 11:07 pm
Forum: Love and Romance
Topic: Storm Inside
Replies: 5
Views: 1664

Re: Storm Inside

Mos t of us have been here at least once. Stay strong and look to the sky. Nice poem, I especially love the last line "I am lost in love with you". It gives the feeling of hopelessness you feel when going through something like that.
by midnight_kitty_kat
Thu Mar 28, 2013 5:04 pm
Forum: Briefs:
Topic: Haiku
Replies: 3
Views: 3194

Haiku

My bittersweet Moon
Bouncing your bewitching beams
Soundless as night air


Ha! I thought I had edited this one, turns out the page must have froze or something because it was the same as before!

NOW it's a haiku :wink:
by midnight_kitty_kat
Thu Mar 28, 2013 9:44 am
Forum: Love and Romance
Topic: Obsessed with fate.
Replies: 8
Views: 2255

Re: Obsessed with fate.

It inspires such a feeling of longing. I found myself repeatingit in my head throughout the day.
by midnight_kitty_kat
Thu Mar 28, 2013 6:31 am
Forum: Love and Romance
Topic: Love's Melody
Replies: 0
Views: 902

Love's Melody

Good morning restless heart.
Hello again.
Quiet your fluttering rhyme.
The sweetest harmonies await.

Brilliant they dance
in the rhapsody
of his cerulean eyes.
by midnight_kitty_kat
Sat Mar 23, 2013 12:08 pm
Forum: Love and Romance
Topic: Obsessed with fate.
Replies: 8
Views: 2255

Re: Obsessed with fate.

This is really beautiful :crying:

Great read.
by midnight_kitty_kat
Thu Dec 09, 2010 7:51 am
Forum: Love and Romance
Topic: Love Whispers
Replies: 4
Views: 956

Re: Love Whispers

I think we've all been there before. It may not have ended up so perfect for everyone, but it's nice to see it put into words.
God one
by midnight_kitty_kat
Thu Dec 09, 2010 7:37 am
Forum: Funny Business
Topic: Computer Generated Poetry
Replies: 11
Views: 2503

Re: Computer Generated Poetry

I liked that a lot. I really needed to smile.
:lol:
by midnight_kitty_kat
Thu Dec 09, 2010 7:32 am
Forum: Workshop/Critiques Wanted
Topic: No Title
Replies: 2
Views: 1433

No Title

You look at me, with once familiar eyes. The color of liquid amber has changed. Replaced by a dark brooding brown. The gentle pools, the windows to your soul are now raging. Violent, the turbulence waxing, beneath the confusion. I stare. Watching the sunlight glance off the lashes I have kissed a th...
by midnight_kitty_kat
Wed Apr 11, 2007 7:28 pm
Forum: Teen Spirit
Topic: **The Ballad of Ann-Marie** Poem of the Week: 3.11.07
Replies: 12
Views: 4595

I liked it! Reminds me of Beowulf a bit, except that I didn't like that story ^_^

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