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by midnight_kitty_kat
Thu Sep 12, 2013 11:08 pm
Forum: Love and Romance
Topic: Mad Love
Replies: 2
Views: 1250

Re: Mad Love

I was surprised by the sexual turn it took but I really liked the poem! :thumbsup:
by midnight_kitty_kat
Sat Sep 07, 2013 9:37 am
Forum: Briefs:
Topic: Haiku
Replies: 3
Views: 3178

Re: Haiku

:bump:
by midnight_kitty_kat
Sat Sep 07, 2013 8:56 am
Forum: Form in Poetry, Classical and New
Topic: Broken Promises (Pantoum)
Replies: 5
Views: 3020

Re: Broken Promises (Pantoum)

I will check those out. I've fallen in love with form poetry I think :)
by midnight_kitty_kat
Sat Sep 07, 2013 8:54 am
Forum: Form in Poetry, Classical and New
Topic: The Butterfly Dance (Nonet)
Replies: 3
Views: 2382

Re: The Butterfly Dance (Nonet)

:bow: I LOVE it! Wow, that is visually striking, and almost changes the way it makes me feel. When aligned to the left it seems like more of a whimsical piece, but this way I think it captures me as a reader much more. Thank you for the suggestion.
by midnight_kitty_kat
Fri Sep 06, 2013 9:10 pm
Forum: Love and Romance
Topic: Storm Inside
Replies: 5
Views: 1660

Re: Storm Inside

:thumbsup:
by midnight_kitty_kat
Fri Sep 06, 2013 9:05 pm
Forum: Form in Poetry, Classical and New
Topic: Kahlil Gibrans "Hymn of Man"
Replies: 14
Views: 8261

Re: Kahlil Gibrans "Hymn of Man"

What a stunning way he's captured our history and essence. I love this.
by midnight_kitty_kat
Fri Sep 06, 2013 9:01 pm
Forum: Form in Poetry, Classical and New
Topic: Broken Promises (Pantoum)
Replies: 5
Views: 3020

Re: Broken Promises (Pantoum)

Thank you :grin: I really enjoyed writing in this style. It's fun to reuse the phrases in different contexts.
by midnight_kitty_kat
Fri Sep 06, 2013 8:58 pm
Forum: Form in Poetry, Classical and New
Topic: The Butterfly Dance (Nonet)
Replies: 3
Views: 2382

The Butterfly Dance (Nonet)

Vivid butterflies dance divinely.
Delicate wings flashing brightly.
Mesmerizing. Picturesque.
In cloudless summer skies.
Enticing delight.
Fascinating.
Exquisite.
Stunning
me.
by midnight_kitty_kat
Thu Sep 05, 2013 1:30 pm
Forum: Form in Poetry, Classical and New
Topic: Broken Promises (Pantoum)
Replies: 5
Views: 3020

Broken Promises (Pantoum)

Torment me with broken promises. Broken hearts and broken bones thinly veiled fright, lonely and cold. No one remembers how it was. Broken hearts and broken bones? Aching for darkness to call him home, no one remembers what he was like. Be careful, cold hearts die alone. Aching for darkness to call ...
by midnight_kitty_kat
Thu Aug 29, 2013 10:21 am
Forum: Workshop/Critiques Wanted
Topic: Untitled Pantoum
Replies: 2
Views: 2750

Re: Untitled Pantoum

Thank you very much :grin:
by midnight_kitty_kat
Sun Aug 25, 2013 7:52 am
Forum: Workshop/Critiques Wanted
Topic: Untitled Pantoum
Replies: 2
Views: 2750

Untitled Pantoum

Torment me with broken promises. Broken hearts and broken bones thinly veiled fright, lonely and cold. No one remembers how it was. Broken hearts and broken bones? Aching for darkness to call him home, no one remembers what he was like. Be careful, cold hearts die alone. Aching for darkness to call ...
by midnight_kitty_kat
Fri May 31, 2013 12:45 am
Forum: Briefs:
Topic: Haiku
Replies: 3
Views: 3178

Re: Haiku

I have edited this so that it is actually a haiku now ;). As you can see I didn't have that quite right hah.
by midnight_kitty_kat
Tue Apr 02, 2013 6:43 pm
Forum: Workshop/Critiques Wanted
Topic: The Last Curtain Call
Replies: 5
Views: 2294

Re: The Last Curtain Call

heinzs wrote:I would normally consider "crumbling" as two syllables (crum-bling), though poetically it can be streeeeeetched to 3 (crum-bl-ing) :thumbsup:
Oh I must've been strectching. Easily fixed, I will edit it to say "Inside I am crumbling" :cool:
by midnight_kitty_kat
Tue Apr 02, 2013 2:22 pm
Forum: Fun & Games
Topic: Currently Listening To (IV)
Replies: 8
Views: 4370

Re: Currently Listening To (IV)

I also love fan whirring and microwave ding is a classic.
Unfortunately right now I'm listening to 4 yo whine. It's pretty hardcore :shrug:
by midnight_kitty_kat
Tue Apr 02, 2013 12:18 am
Forum: Fun & Games
Topic: Currently Listening To (IV)
Replies: 8
Views: 4370

Re: Currently Listening To (IV)

Medication by Silverstein ♡

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