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by Floetry Spades
Mon Jun 19, 2006 3:23 pm
Forum: Funny Business
Topic: I Get High On You (lyric)
Replies: 14
Views: 6688

:lol: The chorus is most funny. LoL.
by Floetry Spades
Mon Jun 05, 2006 12:54 pm
Forum: Form in Poetry, Classical and New
Topic: PANTOUM [strict form]
Replies: 5
Views: 2781

That was tight! Amazing, man. That's one of the most unique pieces I've read here. :thumbsup:
by Floetry Spades
Wed Mar 15, 2006 10:00 am
Forum: Workshop/Critiques Wanted
Topic: Night Sky (Edited)
Replies: 2
Views: 1430

Well 6, grammatically it's perfect. It's not all that exciting though...I would elaborate more on the topic, and spice it up. :thumbsup: Not bad though.
by Floetry Spades
Fri Jan 27, 2006 10:51 pm
Forum: Teen Spirit
Topic: **Poems**
Replies: 11
Views: 4249

:cool:



It deserves nomination....
by Floetry Spades
Sat Jan 21, 2006 4:37 pm
Forum: Prose, Stories, Roleplays, Story Poems and Epics
Topic: Dial Tone
Replies: 1
Views: 808

by Floetry Spades
Sat Jan 21, 2006 4:36 pm
Forum: Prose, Stories, Roleplays, Story Poems and Epics
Topic: Dial Tone
Replies: 1
Views: 808

Dial Tone

Dial Tone (Clyde, 2:04am, Hotel Room) Any ole' wall street crowney like me would be lying if they told you that a beheaded body near them makes them nervous. Odd stuff like this just happens around New York, especially around places with a lot of money. I'm not going to lie myself and say I haven't ...
by Floetry Spades
Tue Oct 25, 2005 11:25 pm
Forum: Prose, Stories, Roleplays, Story Poems and Epics
Topic: -----4.Sounds That We Call Words-----
Replies: 3
Views: 1194

Wow, you read all four of them already? Your good....thanks for the complements...I'm looking around for more places to post it and I might get lucky and find a magazine that I like...we'll see...
by Floetry Spades
Mon Oct 24, 2005 10:19 pm
Forum: Prose, Stories, Roleplays, Story Poems and Epics
Topic: -----4.Sounds That We Call Words-----
Replies: 3
Views: 1194

-----4.Sounds That We Call Words-----

"Wow....me? You wished for me? That's amazing....I wish and pray for me too....because I'm going through something right now." Faith said, I don't think she quite understood what I said when I said I wished for her...but I let her continue speaking,"Charity....there's something I need to tell you." ...
by Floetry Spades
Mon Oct 24, 2005 10:18 pm
Forum: Prose, Stories, Roleplays, Story Poems and Epics
Topic: -----3.Make A Wish-----
Replies: 0
Views: 730

-----3.Make A Wish-----

Seconds seemed like minutes and minutes seemed like hours...even though the whole ordeal only lasted a few moments. My thighs were bloody....possibly from my period and possibly from Drake entering inside me....so wrongfully....stealing my virginity. The aroma in the air smelled of fish and tears an...
by Floetry Spades
Mon Oct 24, 2005 10:17 pm
Forum: Prose, Stories, Roleplays, Story Poems and Epics
Topic: -----2.A Girl Screaming in Silence-----
Replies: 0
Views: 655

-----2.A Girl Screaming in Silence-----

Faith, who was dressed in an elegant dress, walks around in a field of purple roses.....holding hands with Drake, dressed in a tux, and kissing him gently on his dark brown lips. Around them, the prairie fog thickened making it harder to see anything but silhouettes. There was no star or sun in the ...
by Floetry Spades
Mon Oct 24, 2005 10:16 pm
Forum: Prose, Stories, Roleplays, Story Poems and Epics
Topic: -----1.Hot Chocolate and Toast-----
Replies: 0
Views: 659

-----1.Hot Chocolate and Toast-----

"Faith and Chastity" Its been a roller coaster ride this last week of my life;Everywhere I turn I see visions of her soft smile and warm eyes.... "Charity....are you dressed yet? Come on and eat some breakfast before it gets cold....I don't know why your moving so slow today." My father's voice seep...
by Floetry Spades
Wed Oct 12, 2005 5:15 pm
Forum: Workshop/Critiques Wanted
Topic: Ponytail (revised)
Replies: 2
Views: 1363

Ok, I'll leave as it. :mrgreen:
by Floetry Spades
Wed Oct 12, 2005 5:15 pm
Forum: Workshop/Critiques Wanted
Topic: A Liquidy Blur(revised)
Replies: 3
Views: 1577

it seams another critique about people against homosexuality.....in your face type poems/writing.... I couldn't have said it better myself. You hit the nail directly on the head Richard. I don't know why people think there's some sort of hidden meaning behind my poems. Its exactly what you think it...
by Floetry Spades
Sun Oct 02, 2005 5:44 pm
Forum: Workshop/Critiques Wanted
Topic: Ponytail (revised)
Replies: 2
Views: 1363

Ponytail (revised)

Earth is a poem with verses that cascade through color lyrical whispers that paint my blues speechless beauty,that can only be touched with a sigh Earth is like the fairy-tale "Beauty and The Beast" and I hope the forever will last for I,am in love with Beast because Beauty wasn't natural enough for...
by Floetry Spades
Sun Oct 02, 2005 5:43 pm
Forum: Workshop/Critiques Wanted
Topic: To the Left of the Right (revised)
Replies: 1
Views: 1138

To the Left of the Right (revised)

To the left of the right between the birds and the bee's there's HIV, dangling' from a dick's hook-line why give in to your boyfriend's shit when you've got friends with benefits but see thats where lust contradicts logic and blame douses the shame players buzzy playin' while that HIV positive girl ...

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