Poetry Pages

Nice write, Travis, I really enjoyed it!

My thanks go out to Travis and Bags123 for their kind and much appreciated comments!

Well thank you, I think! LOL!!

Rain Dance Melodic staccato of rhythmic rain pattering softly against the glass of my inter-dimensional windowpane bringing me visions that weep and pass Pattering softly against the glass creating a sound that others miss bringing me visions that weep and pass like star-crossed lovers who sadly kis...

Short and simple but powerful also!

This piece says much with little wordage, and makes the reader think about the message! Bravo!

Great theme here!

I would like to see this in a different structure, as I feel it would enhance what is already a fine piece of work!

A very passionate and powerful poem!

You have captured much pain here, and the reader can feel it as it seeps out between the well-penned lines of this fine piece! Thank you for sharing this work!

I thank you kindly!

As a veteran of Vietnam, I know a bit about what this poem addresses! Thanks for the kind words!

My thanks to both Travis and Heinzs for their kind comments!

Thank you, Travis! I appreciate the read and the feedback!

Thanks, Travis! Glad you enjoyed it!

Thanks much!

Well, that's me, grim and poetic! LOL!!

My thanks to you!

I thought I would post something a little more positive for a change!

Thank you very much!

I didn't expect a response this soon, you overwhelmed me!

You are most welcome, dear lady!