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My little input here is I think that poem is excellent, it made great reading, wish I could write that good.

Hi all, I can't sleep and as usual words are running round in my head LOL. I hope you enjoy my poem and that it gives you a giggle :mrgreen: xxxx THE AGEING PROCESS Aches and pains, joints a creaking Driving me insane Knees go crack, hips dislodge I’m walking like John Wayne! Lines and wrinkles, nee...

I'm not a poetry critic but me as a mere fellow poetry pages friend enjoyed that poem, I thought it spoke truth and volumes.

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yeah, I'm a firm believer in positive thinking and I try my best to keep positive, like you say, its not always easy though.

I rise out of bed What do I find? My bathroom scales Are first on my mind! My daily routine Is get out of bed Then to the bathroom Is where I’ll head I tread ever so gently Onto the scale Then say a prayer Whilst a breath I inhale Please dear lord The pounds I am needing Are a little bit lower Than ...

Tomorrow is another day I'll leave this one behind I'll wake up, get out of bed A better day I'll find When I awake I'll paint a smile On this face of mine Go outside, face the world Let people know I'm fine We have our ups and our downs To me life throws all sorts But I find its always best To keep...

I enjoyed reading that, thx for sharing.

Heavenly Soldier The soldier who died fighting Now stood at Heavens gate Would the Lord embrace him? He waited for his fate God now asked the soldier Do you you deserve a place Here with these good people From the human race? The soldier thinks awhile Then tells God his thought No Lord I’m not perfe...

Well you could knock me down with a feather right now, :shock: I am really pleased with that feedback. Like I said earlier putting together rhyming poems make me happy and I write them for my own pleasure and if others enjoy them all the better. Thank you so much for your input, you have made my day...

Yes most definately, you think it is ok then? I was scared to post it

~Yorkie~

ok here goes :oops: Heavenly Soldier The soldier who died fighting Now stood at Heavens gate Would the Lord embrace him? He waited for his fate God now asked the soldier Do you you deserve a place Here with these good people From the human race? The soldier thinks awhile Then tells God his thought N...

While I woldn't call myself an established poet and I can hardly compare myself to poets here I do enjoy making up rhyming poems. I think some frown upon rhyming poetry but I enjoy putting them together. As it is a day of remembrance today, I put together a poem this morning and I am daring to put i...