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- Tue Jan 17, 2012 4:16 pm
- Forum: Teen Spirit
- Topic: Questions From A Truth Seeker
- Replies: 4
- Views: 8553
Re: Questions From A Truth Seeker
i love the way you structered the poem and it has a very good point to it! well done
- Thu Nov 10, 2011 3:18 pm
- Forum: General Poetry
- Topic: words of a broken heart
- Replies: 3
- Views: 2118
words of a broken heart
is it true are you gone from this horrid place of which you called fate that last breath you took took the sun the moon my love an yet it still shines like your eyes always bright this place so cold filled with empty words your words fill it no longer you make me wish the sun didnt shine moon didnt ...
- Sun Jun 19, 2011 11:17 am
- Forum: General Poetry
- Topic: Falling crystals
- Replies: 1
- Views: 1313
Falling crystals
tiny crystals fall
dripping from above
soak my skin
make me one with gentle grass
wind does blow
thunder does come
a heaviness to bear
trees whisper gentle calls
as i watch with eager eyes
tiny crystals do no harm
soak me with god's peace tonight
dripping from above
soak my skin
make me one with gentle grass
wind does blow
thunder does come
a heaviness to bear
trees whisper gentle calls
as i watch with eager eyes
tiny crystals do no harm
soak me with god's peace tonight
- Tue Jun 14, 2011 5:34 pm
- Forum: The New Members' Café
- Topic: Tombstones
- Replies: 5
- Views: 3385
Re: Tombstones
its a very good point you have but it feels like the poem is very cut up
- Tue Jun 14, 2011 5:32 pm
- Forum: The New Members' Café
- Topic: What you see isn't real
- Replies: 1
- Views: 1819
What you see isn't real
Flag goes up and back around slash smile forever in place mouth forms empty words of hope need want slash notes float about as the ball goes in flag goes up and back around slash alone the girl stands to watch her love the forbiden one slash the feeling envelops her like the thickest thorns the thou...
- Tue Jun 14, 2011 5:17 pm
- Forum: The New Members' Café
- Topic: models want everything
- Replies: 3
- Views: 4017
Re: models want everything
what do you mean by strange?
- Tue Jun 14, 2011 1:02 pm
- Forum: The New Members' Café
- Topic: Everybody Says...
- Replies: 3
- Views: 2323
Re: Everybody Says...
very nice poem. perdonally i would have made it not general and more seep i suppose or personal is a better word but overall cool!
- Mon Jun 13, 2011 1:58 pm
- Forum: The New Members' Café
- Topic: models want everything
- Replies: 3
- Views: 4017
models want everything
the mirror only shows skin deep
light shining on perfect skin ... but is it real?
heels standing 6 inches talll.. graceful is the attack
breathe out breathe in and look inside the cracks
your inperfections are sitting in front of you
light shining on perfect skin ... but is it real?
heels standing 6 inches talll.. graceful is the attack
breathe out breathe in and look inside the cracks
your inperfections are sitting in front of you
- Sun Jun 12, 2011 5:46 pm
- Forum: The New Members' Café
- Topic: What is life without temptation
- Replies: 4
- Views: 2605
Re: What is life without temptation
heheh thx i randomly write all of my stuff and i will deff. format my lines beta!
- Sun Jun 12, 2011 5:36 pm
- Forum: The New Members' Café
- Topic: What is life without temptation
- Replies: 4
- Views: 2605
What is life without temptation
pretty angels. broken wings ... sing the tainted lulaby of my dreams... black skies fade with empty tears... wash away with empty hopes... stuck in the ground to watch the pretty birdies sing... as black skies fade to white.