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by chrisdavid
Thu Apr 14, 2011 12:44 pm
Forum: The Ravyn's Wings
Topic: Cycle of Abuse
Replies: 1
Views: 8795

Re: Cycle of Abuse

This is so sad. I only can give you my deepest sympathies on facing this sort of abuse. You've had an extremely tough
life, but you're such a fighter, something I admire greatly about you.
Take care, Chris.
by chrisdavid
Wed Oct 13, 2010 12:03 pm
Forum: Love and Romance
Topic: 'til The Day It Was Gone
Replies: 1
Views: 1491

'til The Day It Was Gone

We met at the train station And instantly we knew Because there was no hesitation Back then we danced to our favourite song We didn't know what we had 'til the day it was gone Our love was undiminished But as each day went by Slowly we were finished I guess time is what drifted us apart But we'll al...
by chrisdavid
Wed Oct 13, 2010 11:32 am
Forum: Love and Romance
Topic: Love Whispers
Replies: 4
Views: 2655

Re: Love Whispers

Nice write. Glad to hear of a good romance that's still going strong.
Take care, Chris.
by chrisdavid
Mon Oct 04, 2010 11:53 am
Forum: Seeking the Spiritual
Topic: Vegetables of the Spirit
Replies: 6
Views: 5018

Re: Vegetables of the Spirit

Great stuff!! You use the different vegetables to describe things excellently.
All the best, Chris.
by chrisdavid
Sat Oct 02, 2010 6:57 am
Forum: Love and Romance
Topic: Lonely
Replies: 3
Views: 2188

Re: Lonely

Thanks for looking, my friend.
Chris.
by chrisdavid
Sat Oct 02, 2010 3:11 am
Forum: Love and Romance
Topic: Lonely
Replies: 3
Views: 2188

Lonely

You are lonely Living a life of pain All the sadness that you breathe You only have yourself to blame You are crying For a happiness you can't find No matter how far you have searched Your love is blind You are lonely But you try and stay strong All the dreams you had were there But now they are gon...
by chrisdavid
Fri Oct 01, 2010 12:30 pm
Forum: General Poetry
Topic: Richmond Lake
Replies: 1
Views: 1358

Richmond Lake

The morning sun rises early It's time to rush on out It's where everyone wants to be It's what everybody talks about We take our chairs and our rods And sit there with our bait There's no where better to fish than Richmond Lake We take our homemade boat And set out on a cruise We sometimes decide to...
by chrisdavid
Fri Oct 01, 2010 12:02 pm
Forum: Workshop/Critiques Wanted
Topic: My Smile
Replies: 5
Views: 4864

Re: My Smile

This is a little gem!! Very enjoyable.
All the best, Chris.
by chrisdavid
Fri Oct 01, 2010 1:35 am
Forum: General Poetry
Topic: Dancing in Wal-Mart
Replies: 7
Views: 3816

Re: Dancing in Wal-Mart

Dancing in a supermarket! Sounds very romantic, a bit like a film I saw starring Richard Gere, only he started dancing with his wife in a department store.
Good stuff, Chris.
by chrisdavid
Fri Oct 01, 2010 1:30 am
Forum: General Poetry
Topic: Keep right on to the end of the road.
Replies: 2
Views: 1570

Re: Keep right on to the end of the road.

Excellent. Great rhythm and flow. Very enjoyable.
Take care, Chris.
by chrisdavid
Fri Oct 01, 2010 1:20 am
Forum: General Poetry
Topic: The Goodnight Lullaby
Replies: 1
Views: 1333

The Goodnight Lullaby

Goodnight, little one, goodnight Time to turn out your light Your day's been long, so I'll sing you a song Look at the starry skies Then close your eyes Goodnight, my dear, goodnight I hope everything is alright Your teddy you keep, by your side as you sleep You're in safe hands I hope you understan...
by chrisdavid
Thu Sep 30, 2010 12:53 am
Forum: In Tribute
Topic: I Just Want You To Know
Replies: 1
Views: 2538

I Just Want You To Know

I look out of my window I look up to the sky And I ask the question 'Why?' I still see your smile I see your face And now you're gone without a trace I know you will never see me But this how it's meant to be I seem so empty My heart sinks so deep Everytime I start to weep My hurt is silent I still ...
by chrisdavid
Thu Sep 30, 2010 12:41 am
Forum: Love and Romance
Topic: Peace and love.
Replies: 4
Views: 2320

Re: Iron's hot, right a spot.

Yes, spot on! Would sound excellent.
Chris.
by chrisdavid
Tue Sep 28, 2010 11:30 am
Forum: Seeking the Spiritual
Topic: Devils Terms
Replies: 10
Views: 5192

Re: Devils Terms

For a first post, I found this excellent!! 10 out of 10!!
Chris.
by chrisdavid
Mon Sep 27, 2010 1:23 pm
Forum: General Poetry
Topic: One, decayed
Replies: 15
Views: 17817

Re: One, decayed

I'm sorry to hear about your troubles. Nice to hear that you're glad you're still around. Good piece.
All the best, Chris.

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